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Shocking New Evidence of UFO Invasion. Content Warning.
In the quiet of a summer night in 1952, the world held its breath as a series of events unfolded, both in the heavens and on Earth, leaving a mark on history that would remain shrouded in mystery for decades to come.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Former CIA Doctor Reveals Military Deaths Caused by UFOs. Content Warning.
In the murky corridors of government secrecy, Dr. Christopher Green embarked on a quest for truth that would shake the very foundations of our understanding of the cosmos. It began with a bombshell revelation: hundreds of American servicemen had suffered injury or death after encounters with anomalous unidentified craft. As a neuroimaging expert with decades of experience, Dr. Green had seen his fair share of mysteries, but nothing could have prepared him for this.
By Gunduz2 years ago in Critique
Unveiling the Enigmatic Roy Kin: A Tale of Deception and Resilience in Northern Vietnam
Unveiling the Enigmatic Roy Kin: A Tale of Deception and Resilience in Northern Vietnam The Legend of Roy Kin In the enigmatic landscape of Northern Vietnam, a figure shrouded in mystery and notoriety emerges - Roy Kin. Renowned as a symbol of unwavering spirit and relentless determination, Roy Kin embodies the quintessence of the region's ethos - a blend of resilience and the thirst for battle.
By lam duong2 years ago in Critique
Pop fans rejoice as Madonna and Kylie Minogue perform together during Celebration tour
Pop symbols Kylie Minogue and Madonna played out a two part harmony together in festival of Worldwide Ladies' Day, a second music fans have been sitting tight forty years for.
By prashant soni2 years ago in Critique
Razzie Awards 2024: Winnie the Pooh slasher film and Expend4bles named year's worst
Winnie the Pooh: Blood and Honey has cleared the board at the Razzie Grants, winning five of the 10 classifications. The slasher film exploited the copyright for AA Milne's exemplary story terminating, and reconsidered the characters of the Hundred Section of land Wood as awful chronic executioners.
By prashant soni2 years ago in Critique
The Cinema
The movie theater was a brand-new kind of entertainment that first appeared in the late 19th century. Simple moving graphics were first displayed on displays in tiny spaces, enthralling viewers with the illusion of motion. This young art form developed become a potent storytelling, creative, and cultural expression tool over time.
By Vijay Kumar2 years ago in Critique
Critique Requested: "The Kelpie"
Begging for critique! Overall, I like The Kelpie, but the opening of Part One feels rambling and completely all over the place. It needs toightening, and I'm floundering. Which bits would you cut? Is there anything that pulls you out of the story? Does it matter that I haven't named the town or village where she lives? Is that a flaw?
By L.C. Schäfer2 years ago in Critique
Critiques Needed: First pages of Project Styx. Top Story - January 2024. Content Warning.
Authors note: I would like constructive critiques on the first pages of a sci-fi fantasy book I am working on. I would like to know first impressions and things that need to be worked on. This is so I can get an idea of what an agent or editor might think. I also know that this is long—no need to read the whole thing, in fact, tell me when you lose interest.
By K. Kocheryan2 years ago in Critique
Writing About Writing: Points of Divergence
In any story building off pre-established events, whether that's fanfiction, alternate history, speculative future fiction, twisted fairytales, or some other re-telling, there has to be a point of divergance.
By Natasja Rose2 years ago in Critique
Rajasthan Election Results 2023: BJP Emerges Victorious with 109 Seats; Ashok Gehlot Tenders Resignation - LIVE Updates. Content Warning.
In a riveting turn of events, the Rajasthan Election Results 2023 have unfolded with unprecedented drama and anticipation. The BJP has secured a commanding victory, winning 109 seats and leading in six others. The political landscape of the state is undergoing a seismic shift as Ashok Gehlot, the incumbent Chief Minister, tenders his resignation. This blog post aims to provide a comprehensive overview of the unfolding events, offering real-time updates on the Rajasthan Election Results 2023.
By Debjit Das2 years ago in Critique
Untitled Rough Drafter I'm Calling it "Part 2 Draft"
Some would say I made my bed it’s time I lie in it. Some would say, what I did I had every tragic thing done to me coming. This is in the mind of a survivor, I could hear the crashing waves as my eyes flutter open. I look over as I feel his warm body holding me I knew this felt right I just didn’t want to admit it. He isn’t married but you slept with your best friend’s boyfriend. I try to rationalise this, but it is impossible. I look into his eyes holding his cheek pondering how can something that should be wrong feel so right.
By Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)2 years ago in Critique
Killers of the Flower Moon
During the 1920s, a vile plot unfurled in the core of the US, a plot that would perpetually scar the historical backdrop of the Osage Local American clan. This dim part in American history shapes the setting of Martin Scorsese's most recent realistic magnum opus, "Killers of the Flower Moon. The film depends on a genuine story and highlights a remarkable cast including Leonardo DiCaprio, Robert De Niro, and Lily Gladstone. In this article, we'll dive into the film's depiction of its characters and its strong investigation of affection, double-crossing, and the progression of time.
By R Roka2 years ago in Critique