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Easter acrostic
What is the season of Easter? To me it is the season of wishes and hopes for all times. We all know that this holiday is about they Lord Jesus and what he did for us. It is also a day of fun for the very young child and visions of the Easter bunny hiding decorated eggs and hiding baskets with all sort of goodies inside, but
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Happy Easter!
Dear Creators: Just wanting to wish everyone a Very Happy Easter! He is Risen! To all the children out the Easter Bunny has, hopefully, delivered Easter baskets to all filled with all sorts of good stuff. Easter is also a time to reflect and pray. Again, He is risen for us all!
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Capitalism
This is a new series for me which by the title of this one will be known as 'Economics Acrostics'. What is economics? We have at one time or another have studied the basics of this subject in high school and some have moved on to major in this area in college and graduate school and have it become their profession and now call themselves 'economists'. This first acrostic is titled 'Capitalism'.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Big Sky a novel
'Big Sky' a novel written by the British author Kate Atkinson is a crime novel that seems to me several small cases entwined with one big case. There are many characters who are all intertwined with each other. There's Katja and Nadja; Mark Price; Nathan; Gary; Vincent; Reggie and Ronnie and a few others. It is a story of sex trafficking, as well as how family relationships can change over time. This is a good story, but it does go back and forth a lot with the story and stories. The short chapters made this a quick read though for I read it in two days. The book cover is done well and gives the reader a sense of the the locations of the story.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Creation, Exodus, and Adam and Eve. Content Warning.
In these critiques using 'The Book of Mormon' and starting from the beginning there were points that reminded me of the Creation as well as the Exodus story as we know the families go into the Wilderness. In Chapter Six of 'Nephi' "Therefore let us go; let us be strong like unto Moses", and I am thinking this is the same Moses that I learned about. "After he truly spake unto the waters of the Red Sea and they divided hither and thither, and our fathers came out of captivity, and on dry ground, and the armies of Pharaoh did follow and did drown in the waters of the Red Sea."
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
