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How Big is The Universe?
How Enormous is The Universe? The universe, a broad and puzzling element, extends a long ways past the constraints of human insight and understanding. Its limitlessness and intricacy have charmed space experts, physicists, and rationalists for quite a long time. While we have taken huge steps in understanding the universe, the genuine size of the universe stays quite possibly of the most significant inquiry in science.
By robail shahzadi2 years ago in Critique
ABD
I am a person who has earned a doctorate, but I did not complete a dissertation. I wanted to write one, but my topics were not approved for being too general. Anyway, I really could not afford to work on this grand final paper anyhow. With my doctoral degree I am an Education Specialist. This allows me to do anything that an EdD can do, but who is going to hire someone so close to retirement age. I will be 60 in a few days.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Butterflies
Here is a page of butterflies that I colored with crayons. I also thought if there were any preschool or kindergarten teachers this would make a good worksheet. The teacher could have the students circle all the blue butterflies, put a square around the red butterflies and a triangle around the orange butterflies when they know their shapes. That is only one idea for there are other skills that early teachers could use this for maybe an image for a science nature walk. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Flowers and Shapes
Here is another coloring page that I completed the I entitled 'Flowers and Shapes' mainly using crayons and a few colored pencils. I mainly used blues, greens, along with pink, oranges. Mainly, I let the colors lead the way on this one. Please comment and I hope you are still looking and commenting on my other color art. Thank you for all comments.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Light on Snow
Here is a novel written by Anita Shreve entitled 'Light on Snow'. This is the story of a father and daughter by the names of Robert and Nicky, who are just trying to cope and understand the loss of a wife and mother and the loss of a baby sister. They both think that they are doing fine, but they realize things when a visitor of sorts stays with them during a severe snowstorm right before Christmas. Nicky and her father both like the winter for the light on snow are picture perfect. Anita Shreve has written a story that will have readers smiling and in tears all at the same the time.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The 5th Horseman
Here is another great read from James Patterson and Maxine Paetro entitled 'The 5th Horseman. This is a detective mystery novel about a homicide detective by the name of Lindsey Boxer, a detective lieutenant and her best friend Yuki Castellano and a few other friends and co-workers. There are two cases that seem to be intertwined one dealing with malpractice and one with aspects like an angel of death. There are two phrases in this story that will make you think 'A bad wind blows' and when someone says, 'I plead the fifth on the grounds that it may incriminate me.' James Patterson and Maxine Paetro have written a novel that is many chapters, but are very short that makes this a fast read that one would like to savor but cannot wait to see how it ends.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Anniversary
This is not for a Vocal+ entry that is going on, but my view of this word 'anniversary'. An anniversary is a chance to say to people congratulations on many accounts as in being married many years or the sadness of losing someone special or just a birthday anniversary of someone lost. It is a time to remember some occasion.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Soap Opera
Anyone out still watch the daytime dramas? To be honest I still watch short snippets of the ones still on television. My favorite back in high school was General Hospital and even today I still watch maybe at the most a half hour or so. My other favorites which are no longer on were All My Children, One Life to Live and Ryan's Hope. When I was little there were a few that I watched with my mom for I was not in school yet and they were 'The Secret Storm' and 'Love of Life' and I think 'The Doctors' and 'Days of Our Lives' which is still on today. They covered so many issues from drugs, sex, divorce and many other issues to numerous to list here. The characters were like family at times even though at various times in the stories all you wanted to do was slap them silly for some very stupid acts.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The New Heaven and the New Earth
Anyone out there that believe in the idea of the New Heaven and the New Earth. I have read in a spiritual newsletter that this is when Heaven comes down to Earth. There will be no pain of any kind. There will be plenty of food and water. It will be a chance to catch up with family members that have gone before.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Streets of Panic Park
Who out there has ever read the Goosebumps books by R.L. Stine? You know the horror/thriller novels that are supposed to be for kids, but for some reason this adult likes them to. R.L. Stine has written 'The Streets of Panic Park' a part of the Goosebumps Horrorland series. In this edition a group of young kids and their parents go to Horrorland, an amusement park that is scary fun for all, but for a few kids they are told to go to Panic Park that has been closed for decades and the horror begins but will fear win out.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Stall Buddies
Here is an old children's chapter book entitled 'Stall Buddies' written by Penny Pollock and illustrated by Gail Owens. This is the story of a young horse by the name of Scarlett who was bought by a horse trainer Bud the owner of the farm. Scarlett is to be a horse racer but must figure out a way so that she will not be afraid of every little thing. Scarlett makes friends at her new home, but does she really fit. Gail Owens' illustrations are like pencil sketches but well-detailed and does tell the story as well as Penny's words.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
