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Parents
Patient passionate particular peculiar Parents. (Note: This can describe several types of parents. For aren't there out there patient, particular or peculiar and even parents that are so passionate about being a parent that they hover of their children.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Thriller Story " Cooperative Mission"
PROLOGUE: THE TRAGEDY(8 Years ago) 8 years ago a young couple went for a holiday trip in a taxi. With music playing it was very soothing and peaceful. But everything changed in a fraction of a second. Suddenly a truck came from the front and the taxi collided with it and in a flash their dreams were shattered.
By Paravnoor Singh Sethiabout a year ago in Critique
Before you go
Before you go what was the best part of this summer season? For me this was a summer of very hot and humid days that really was not the best part of this summer. I would have to think back to my childhood days for my best parts of summer, so this summer season was just too humid to really enjoy anything with temperatures in the 100's. You cannot bask in the sunshine when it is that nasty hot and humid and you break a sweat just walking slowly to get the mail or walk two dogs around the house.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Before you go
Before you go what are some of the ways you can make space for new opportunities in your life? I can make space for some new opportunities by organizing my writing materials for a more organized feeling for writing. It seems like the autumn season is a season of change and to me that means a time for reorganization or to make some changes to how I am going to do my various projects dealing with writing, coloring and crafts. Right now for some reason I do not feel organized, but I am trying to get things in order soon.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
