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What we do in the shadows
Taika is absolutely hilarious. People seem to forget that after Thor 4. If you need a reminder, I highly recommend watching "What We Do in The Shadows". I get it, it can be a niche comedy. But when you get a chance, watch this film! Hurry up with "We'rewolves" already!
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique
The Calvin Stickers
Let the grifters grift. It’s their only gift. You work hard on your craft. You spend hours on your craft. Just for someone to drop a link. Or worse, they drop something unrelated. It stinks. Maybe Bill Watterson was right, when he chose to ignore the sticker grifters. We’ll see.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
Does size matter?
Does size matter? Am I critiquing an actual work here? Nope. Just expressing a thought. How big should a link be at the end of an article? I often like my pics for covers, because some Unsplash images make links too large when linked at the bottom of an article.
By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Critique
Ethereal Symphony
In this captivating artwork, luminous strokes dance gracefully, forming a breathtaking play of light. Yet, while composition echoes brilliance, an opportunity for deeper narrative connection arises. By intertwining thematic elements, this symphony could evoke profound emotions, ensuring lasting resonance in the observer's heart.
By Peter Tanjala2 years ago in Critique
Social Media's Double-Edged Sword: Fueling Civic Engagement or Igniting Polarization in Democracy?"
In the modern digital landscape, the convergence of social media and democracy has emerged as a focal point laden with both potential and skepticism. Within this realm, the allure of boundless connectivity and unparalleled access to information has positioned social media platforms as conduits for personal connections, catalysts for grassroots movements, and catalysts for heightened civic involvement. However, this transformation is not without its detractors, who argue that these platforms bear responsibility for exacerbating societal divisions and fostering the creation of echo chambers.
By Satyam Magar2 years ago in Critique
Introduction for "Living in MAGIC"
(Hello lovely Vocal members! I would love some feedback on this introduction for a personal development book I'm writing. Please answer honestly in the comments - Would you be intrigued enough to continue reading? Why or why not?)
By Katie Kiesling2 years ago in Critique
A Wrinkle in Time
Meg and Charles Murry’s father goes missing and they bring their friend Calvin O’Keefe to another world to fight a monster called the thing. It was nominated and won several well deserved awards. It is a great book, well written and I recommend that you read it. A great work!
By Alex H Mittelman 2 years ago in Critique
The Fighter
His eyes opened in startling fashion as the alarm clock blared on his nightstand. What should have been a wakeup call sounded more like the somber ringing of church bells. He blinked slowly, staring up at the ceiling lethargically, and for a fleeting moment he felt nothing. His hand reached haphazardly to his alarm, where, finally reaching it, the sound ceased, and he was left in total silence. He propped himself up and sat at the edge of the bed. His long legs stretched to the floor where his feet lay firmly on the ground.
By John McC2 years ago in Critique
"Unveiling the Truth: Is the Education System a Beacon of Enlightenment or a Tool for Political Agenda?"
The education system stands as a foundational element within societies, holding the enticing potential to lead us toward understanding and advancement. Yet, behind its noble appearance, a complex dynamic comes into view – a push and pull between its role in nurturing young minds with knowledge, analytical thinking, and values, and the lurking possibility of manipulation for political motives. This intricate interplay sparks a pivotal question: Can education be a radiant force, empowering individuals to shape a brighter future, or does it possess the capacity to be wielded subtly, perpetuating existing power structures?
By Satyam Magar2 years ago in Critique
The Big Short
An absolute rollercoaster of emotions from start to finish; dread, hopelessness, defeat, excitement, hope ironically enough. The Big Short has it all. A fantastic, hilarious, tragic film that's able to simplify complex wall street vocabulary, into an easily digestible and understandable message about greed and corruption. Please, watch this film.
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique
Wizard's Ball Game
This is Wizard's Ball (actually that's a terrible name somebody please give me some ideas for something not as laughable), the game of high speed, flying action as two teams of 6 go head to head in the air attempting to score 21 points and the match isn't over until they do!
By Michael Bivens2 years ago in Critique
The Giver by Lois Lowry
The Giver is a great book set in a dystopian future where everyone is forced to act the same and sees in black and white. The Giver eventually gives a young boy his memories from before everything was the same. The boy revolts and wants freedom to finally be different.
By Alex H Mittelman 2 years ago in Critique