Star Wars (1977)
Bad Critique of George Lucas' classic Space Opera.
Whiny boy who dreams of leaving his overbearing uncle and aunt's moisture farm to become a rebellion pilot, gets his wishes and much more. Also, he discovers he's the chosen one for a weird cult of space wizards and then with his new pals destroys a planet killing space station.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH10 days ago in Critique
Comments (9)
LOL this may be my favorite review of Star Wars ever. I don't disagree with anything you've said...
I've never watched Star Wars but your review made ma laugh! 🤣🤣🤣
Don't forget the part where he's crushing on his sister for awhile.
“Weird cult of space wizards”.. A Fun critique!! 😄
Haha. Oh man. Great critique. Great movie too.
Ahah I love OG Star Wars but Luke being whiny in the first movie is so true
Ahaha LOVE that you slipped the word pals in there 🤭☺️😂
Fairly accurate!
Had to rush over as soon as I saw the notification! Bad? No. Accurate? Yes, sir!