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My love my strength my queen

You are worth it you are amazing

By K-jayPublished 12 months ago 2 min read



My Love, My Strength, My Queen

My love, I don’t tell you enough how much you amaze me. Through every storm, through every heartbreak, through every moment the world tried to break you, you stood. Not just for yourself, but for us—for our family, for me, even when I didn’t deserve it.

I’ve watched you carry the weight of pain that no one should have to bear. I’ve seen you grieve what was lost and still find the strength to love, to give, to hope. When your own family turned against you, when life tested you again and again, you remained. You kept going, kept loving, kept believing.

You are my queen. And a queen deserves to be honored, cherished, and treated with the love and respect she has always given. You deserve every ounce of joy this world has to offer, and I vow to make sure you know that every single day.

You are beautiful, not just because of what you’ve endured, but because of who you are. Even without the battles, even without the struggles, you would still shine. Your heart, your kindness, your spirit—those are the things that make you incredible. And soon, the world will see it too. They will see you the way I do. They will see how much you shine.

And I? I was foolish not to always see it, not to always cherish it. But I see you now. I see everything you are, everything you have been, and everything you will be. And I love you more for it.

You are my greatest blessing.

My Queen, My Light

Through every storm, you stood tall,
A force unbroken, a heart that refused to fall.
The world pressed against you, tried to steal your grace,
Yet you rose each time, light shining on your face.

I’ve seen you carry burdens no soul should bear,
Loss and sorrow met with love still there.
When family turned, when the nights felt long,
You held on, you remained strong.

You are my queen, crowned not by gold,
But by the love and strength you hold.
You deserve the world, its joy and its light,
To be cherished in morning and honored at night.

You are beauty, not just in pain,
But in laughter, in love, in all that remains.
Even if life had never tried to break you,
You would still shine, radiant and true.

And I—blind before, now I see,
All that you are, all you mean to me.
The world will know, they’ll witness in time,
The brilliance that’s yours, the way that you shine.

My queen, my love, my greatest blessing,
Forever and always, my heart’s confession.

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About the Creator

K-jay


I weave stories from social media,and life, blending critique, fiction, and horror. Inspired by Hamlet, George R.R. Martin, and Stephen King, I craft poetic, layered tales of intrigue and resilience,

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  • Alex H Mittelman 12 months ago

    Your writing is amazing! You’re the writing king! Good work!

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