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Most recently published stories in Critique.

The Enchanted Telescope
Once upon a time in a quaint village nestled between rolling hills and dense forests, lived a young boy named Oliver. Oliver had always been intrigued by the stars, the moon, and the mysteries of the universe. Every night, he would lay on the grass in his backyard, gazing at the vast expanse of the sky with wonder in his eyes.
By Dot Stories2 years ago in Critique
Alcoholics Anonymous
A book for alcoholics, by alcoholics, written in the late 30s, with little input from women. There were revisions in 55, 76, and 2001.
By Denise E Lindquist2 years ago in Critique
Game of Thrones Final Season a Game of Throes. Top Story - August 2023.
For seven seasons, nine families fought for dominion over the fictional Westeros in Game of Thrones. Some fought with magnificent purpose, others with unfathomable malice. In the series' eighth and final season, without consulting the master creator George R.R. Martin, malicious screenwriter's metamorphic bromides made it a Game of Throes.
By J. S. Wade2 years ago in Critique
ACOTAR
Centuries-old High Fae Lords falling in love with a 19yr old human who all swear like their "cool high schoolers." Abusive relationships, but Rhysand's actions get conveniently explained away while Tamlin is unfairly villainized.
By Sarah Glass2 years ago in Critique
Money heist critique
Money heist, different from used to watch movies, based on the making-off to the original idea that it spreads. The connection between the past and the present makes it more genius. It beats the odds, by giving you no clue about its ending, and the acting really hit the top.
By The illest writer2 years ago in Critique
Unmitigated Greed
Chapter 2 Frank was angry, and having no one person to direct his anger at, he turned it loose on everyone. The summer before his senior year of high school was a mixture of fights and uncontrolled drinking in the cantinas of Nuevo Laredo, Mexico. It was during one such night that he overheard two men talking about back-alley prize fights. He was still sober enough to ask where the fights were being held and how he could enter.
By Mark Gagnon2 years ago in Critique
Imajica
Imajica is a fantasy set across a universe of five connected dimensions one of which is our planet Earth. It is my favourite book and I never want it to end, so I have it on Kindle and restart it when I finish. Majic, Fantasy, Sex, Love, It has everything.
By Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 2 years ago in Critique
Black Girl Magic
Celebrating Women's empowerment, female power, brilliance and strength, Bond's organization emphacises the beauty and versatility of Black women.
By Novel Allen2 years ago in Critique
The Critic
Damien Brisbane was the star in his world of making or breaking restaurants. Yes, he was the dreaded food critic. One of the worlds most feared creatures. He lurks, he lunges, he tastes, and he kills, he then moves on and kills some more. If you want your restaurant to be catapulted into success, everything down to the toothpicks better be in pristine condition when he arrives.
By Haseeb2 years ago in Critique
Gone With The Wind
Scarlett had a true love, Rhett. Yet she yearned for Ashley. A marriage of convenience. War. Two dead husbands. Her parents...dead, her home in shambles.
By Novel Allen2 years ago in Critique
🎼 In The Painted Room 🎼
Fellow Poets & ‘Poetophiles’ If you haven’t heard this song before then I can promise that you are in for an absolute treat.
By Kayleigh Fraser ✨2 years ago in Critique
On Writing
On Writing isn't a how-to; it's a story. A love story. A life story. Like everyone's life story, it's a genre-bending mix of horror, thriller, romance, comedy, and inspiration. We learn lessons as he did, not through checklists and exercises, but through reflection. Examination. Application.
By Adam Patrick2 years ago in Critique