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Feedback Request - first draft
If everything happens for a reason, then what the hell could be the reason for this? I ask myself staring back at eight fully armed cops decked out in full tactical gear as they yelled at me, guns drawn, to both not move and raise my hands to the air.
By Ashleigh Nicole2 years ago in Critique
Jaws
Who knows what lurks just below the surface of the water, eagerly waiting to eat you? The tension arising from the suspense is as tangible as the flimsy bathing costume that barely clings to your skin. Will it ever again be safe to go into the water for a swim?
By Liam Ireland2 years ago in Critique
Amos 'n' Andy 'n' Us 'n' Them
This TV adaptation ran from 1951 to 1953 with African-American actors. It was taken off the air, genius comedy and talent notwithstanding, because it inappropriately presented black "folks'" shenanigans as white entertainment. Brilliant, yes, but it was that perpetuation of the us-and-them motif in media that inclusion needed to end.
By Gerard DiLeo2 years ago in Critique
The Wrestler
The Wrestler is a heartbreaking story about a man sacrificing every ounce of himself to a truly unforgiving world. This is a wonderful, relatable story of chasing your love despite all the pain and heartache. But it also has a great message to always live life on your terms, period.
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique
Uncut Gems
My goodness this film is truly something else. From start to finish this film is an emotional rollercoaster, with an extremely underrate performance by Adam Sandler. This film had me glued to the screen from start to finish. For all Adam Sandler fans, this has to be his pinnacle performance.
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique
Terminator 2 judgement day
Terminator 2, one of if not my favorite movie of all time. A fantastic sequel that should be the blueprint for all sequels. Perfectly balancing expanding on the story and characters, providing fan service of the original film, and providing great twists throughout the whole movie. Truly a masterpiece film.
By Dyllon Rodillon2 years ago in Critique
The 1619 Project
The 1619 Project is a Hulu documentary based on the book of the same name. An investigative journalist, Nikole Hannah-Jones, conducts interviews to guide our journey through Black American history. The six-episode season contains impactful education and storytelling. Those who want to learn about Black America should watch this show.
By Riah the Writer2 years ago in Critique
The Old Man and The Sea
Hemmingway captures the heart of life with Santiago, who won’t believe old age makes him an unlucky fisherman. Strength and tenacity are juxtaposed alongside vulnerability and faith as he fights the giant marlin alone at sea, only to lose it to feasting sharks. Santiago represents man’s will to overcome adversity.
By Sherry Ryan2 years ago in Critique
