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Lightscape: in Review
What is it about lights we love so much? Ultrasonic oil diffusers light up, but it does not add to the ability to diffuse oil. It is merely for ambiance. In a day and age where very few houses in developed areas are without electricity, we spend an awful lot of money on unnecessary candles and fancy accessories. There are entire streets festooned in lights for months every year for Christmas. I’m not sure about other countries, but we Aussies love our Chrissy light completions. And what party is complete without party lights? A friend of mine is starting a business designing and supplying custom neon lights to the public rather than just other businesses (there was a hole in the market, she and her husband plan to rectify it).
By Lilly Cooper2 years ago in Critique
The Youngest Prince
Even though I was running from my attackers in the dark, desolate forest, I couldn't resist the allure of a half-opened door. I found this a mystery; I didn't expect this. I think that's just how magic works - there's always an element of the unknown. My resilience fueled my desire to explore what lay beyond. I left the door open as a sign when I entered, but it closed on its own, so there was no turning back.
By Emily Curry (Rising Phoenix)2 years ago in Critique
Harvestman?
A few months ago, I participated in the 'Dancing with Distraction' acrostic poem challenge here on Vocal. One of my submissions, "The Snapper and My Confidence," actually got Top Story, which was so very cool! Moreover, it received a lot of very kind comments.
By Hannah E. Aaron2 years ago in Critique
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By latene hinds2 years ago in Critique
Toy Story 4
Woody, Buzz and their friends of toys are up for another adventure. When their owner Bonnie goes to her first day, she literally makes a new friend for them, a spork named Forky. While Woody shows a very nervous Forky the joys of being played with as a new toy, Bonnie's family go on a road trip. Then Woody and Forky find themselves lost in a amusement park where they meet new characters, some who want to keep them others who want to use Woody for his voice box. So Woody and Forky must work together to get back to Bonnie and help the other toys.
By Forest Green2 years ago in Critique
Toy Story 3
In this installment, Andy is preparing to go to college. However Woody, Buzz and the gang of toys get seperated from each other after a misunderstanding. Woody gets sent to a house down the street while everyone else go to a daycare which seems like paradise at first. Then they all quickly realize it is treated more like prison after hours and the toy bear they befriended is nothing more than a supposed warden. Woody finds out and sets out a plan to free them and return to Andy before he heads off to college.
By Forest Green2 years ago in Critique
