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A Giant Problem
'A Giant Problem' is book two of Beyond the Spiderwick Chronicles by Tony DiTerlizzi and Holly Black. In this story Nick and Laurie are still trying to help the Nixie's, but another adventure issue pervades their activities in helping them while more fantastical characters are introduced. Nick and Laurie are still learning more about family and friends and working through various ideas and issues. They meet an old man named Noseeum Jack who has a few stories for them. Again, Holly Black's artwork depicts various scenes really well and again would make great coloring pages.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
The Nixie's Song
'The Nixie's Song' is Book One of a three volume series of Beyond the Spiderwick Chronicles created by Tony DiTerlizzi and Holly Black. 'The Nixie's Song' is the story of how Nick Vargas learns all about the magical world that no one else can see. Nick has a few issues that he needs to figure out family wise. His father meets someone and things change. He meets his new stepsister Laurie and a few other things begin to happen that can be somewhat unexplainable. This is a fast paced read and basically for the youth readers out there, but I found them interesting for adults could learn from them too. The illustrations that Holly created were well detailed and I thought they would make good coloring pages.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Gregg Shorthand
Here is a snippet from McGuffey's Eclectic Readers as this one is from the Primer. Quite a while ago I was going to start offering readings and maybe lessons in the subject, but other projects and ideas came first. Please comment on this and let me know if you or anyone would be interested in learning and reading more in Gregg shorthand. I have all the textbooks dealing with Diamond Jubilee Series. Also, I am planning on writing more from the McGuffey's and other textbooks that I have collected from my other studies. I know that Gregg shorthand is an obsolete course, but to me it's like figuring out secret code.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
WHAT YOU NEED NOW
In an unprecedented and historic turn of events, President Joe Biden addressed the nation from the Oval Office, acknowledging the failure of U.S. efforts in Ukraine and Gaza. In a speech that stunned both allies and adversaries, Biden admitted that the complex geopolitical challenges had overwhelmed his administration's strategies and called upon former President Donald Trump to assist in finding a path forward.
By lahsen ezahouani2 years ago in Critique
Teacher & Child
Dr. Haim G. Ginott wrote an academic book entitled 'Teacher & Child' which is a book that I had read for a teacher education course in the late eighties or the early nineties. The course was believe it or not 'Teaching Reading in the Elementary Classroom. This is a book that covers various ideas that a teacher should do and not do in their various classrooms. There are various vignettes throughout the book explaining proper procedures and policies that all teachers must follow liking them or not. After re-reading this book again and seeing it from the angle of a writer it brought back a few memories of my early education. There was a vignette about a social studies teacher Mr. R (I also had a teacher Mr. R) that seemed to compare his class to another easier class if you did not like his way of teaching, which was lecture and discussion versus drawing maps and completing study guides in that other class. In the end I am glad I had his class and learned a lot. 'Teacher & Child' is really all about communication in how and how not to communicate with other teachers, parents, students and administrators. This book may be old but I believe it can still hold up in today's classrooms.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
DALE VALSKOV
DALE VALSKOV - THE CYBER SECURITY VISIONARY In the dynamic world of cyber security, few names carry as much weight as Dale Valskov. Known for his innovative approach and unmatched expertise, Dale has emerged as a visionary in the field, transforming how businesses and individuals protect their digital assets.
By Aiden johansoon2 years ago in Critique
Lizard
Who likes lizards? Lizards are usually greens or browns, but I made this one light blue, yellow, purple and yes for realistic sense brown and green. There this lizard sits on a log seemingly watching a dragonfly hovering over summer flowers of yellow, orange and red. I kind of pictured this lizard swishing his tail in hopes of bringing the dragonfly closer that is why I used light blue for most of the tail for a sense of flow.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Horse
This is a picture of a horse that I pictured as a unicorn minus one horn. With the use of vivid colors of yellow, blue, green, and red I think I pulled off the unicorn idea. I could see a unicorn even though it is a horse walking through the flowers of red, pink, blue and purple picking up more colors on an autumn day with the wind blowing for how I colored the sky to show movement of the sun and clouds. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Giraffe
Here is a giraffe that I pictured as one of jungle royalty for how some of the shapes reminded me of jewels so I used oranges, yellow, light blue, purple and greens in both the mother and the child. I used kind of a light green for the leaves that the mother was pulling down to eat and share under the pink flowers of Spring and orange flowers on the ground.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Frog and Butterfly
Hope you like my psychedelic frog and butterfly. The butterfly flying just out of reach of the frog on his lily pad of two shades of green. While the flowers rising in background are in a soft pink. The frog shows that he wonders why the butterfly looks like him for it has the same coloring as he does of blues, pinks, yellows and greens. I did not color the white space and to show the water I just outlined the water lines in a dark blue. Please comment.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
