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Goddess Athena

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By Patrick M. OhanaPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by Maragathou (CC BY-SA 4.0) via Wikimedia Commons

How do I love Thee, Goddess Athena,

The greatest deity that has ever

Breathed life into the meaning of wisdom

Equity and liberty's arena?

I met You in pages, my soul's bever,

Quickly understanding your love's queendom,

As I poetised Your eternal name,

Lighting my awaken mind with your flame.

Poetry

About the Creator

Patrick M. Ohana

A medical writer who reads and writes fiction and some nonfiction, although the latter may appear at times like the former. Most of my pieces (over 2,200) are or will be available on Shakespeare's Shoes.

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  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    That rhyming pattern was phenomenal ❤️

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