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Earth's Children 2

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By Mark GrahamPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
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Book two of 'Earth's Children series' entitled 'The Valley of Horses' picks up with Ayla all alone for she has been exiled from the Clan. Ayla learns that she has many talents that seem to let her make 'friends' with pretty much all of nature its flora and fauna. Ayla likes living and learning what is around her, but she is also lonely. This is also the story of Jondalar on his journey of growing up and while on this journey with his brother there are choices that need to be made for all, and relationships are made for both.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Antoni De'Leon8 months ago

    Gets more interesting. Worth the hunt for new reads, Loving the Drabbles, i forgot about them.

  • Sera9 months ago

    Wonderful ready

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    Adding this one to my to read list 😛👌♦️

  • PRABAL TR PRO9 months ago

    "Beautiful continuation of Ayla’s journey—her bond with nature and strength shine through. Jondalar’s story adds great depth. Truly touching!"

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