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By WALL_EPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Car Owner, Old Person and Me

Back in 2020, when I was returning from my college to home and I saw an old person helping someone by pushing their car to help all alone then I went to that old person and join to help both of them and all of this watched by the person who was worrying and controlling the car, the person who was the car owner. The car owner seen that I join the old person to help, after when we all three reached the petrol pump there was a little problem that there was a slope to get to the petrol station then I decided to use my whole power to push the car to reach towards the petrol pump section.

Then I say HOORAY! And after that old person and I gave High Five to each other. The car owner also came towards us and says thankyou to both of us for helping.

The car owner said to me that you helped because you saw the old person helping me all alone pushing the car and when I listen to car owner then I told the car owner that actually that old person asked me for my help because I did not even see your car on that time but when I listen to that old person voice then I notice your car. That is how the car owner knew about the fact that old person was helping all alone all the time even though I also helped but only because that old person had asked for my help.

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