With his first album in five years, Isakov wraps me in the warmest golden aura.
Never in a hurry, it commands me to sit still.
Though "Sweet Heat Lightning" sounds like the title of a rock and roll tune, it's anything but.
Simple. Majestic. Ethereal.
Sing to my soul, Greg.
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Alivia Varvel
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Adding to my list
I have never heard of this Greg before, I'll add him to my list! Thank you!
I should totally listen to this! Excellent review!