It's a fan fix based on Edward Cullen, with more sex. Discussing the kind of sex you want is liberating; the sex scenes suck. How many words can you use for a penis? The answer is a lot. However, the overuse of masculine toxicity as a plot device is disheartening
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
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Wild Card Weekend Recap: What Happens Now?
I think I figured out why I love Wild Card Weekend so much. It's because it's the first playoff anything of the calendar year. The NFL season starts in the fall, and once upon a time, the champion was crowned either on or slightly before New Year's. The evolution of the NFL schedule has resulted in the playoffs starting just into the New Year, and currently, the final week of the season falls on the first weekend of the New Year, with Wild Card Weekend coming a week after that. So yes, chronologically, the NFL's Wild Card Weekend serves as the first playoff anything of the calendar year.
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Comments (8)
I hate this book, but love your critique. “How many words can you use for a penis? The answer is a lot.” 😆
Agreed! At the time of these I was so insanely compliant and trying to mold myself to being whatever any man wanted me to be that I didn’t initially see these as toxic. I think it took me a while to see this, from what I recall now. Once I did it was like whoaaaa! Curtains came up. I, like her, would overlook all of his insane behaviour because my mind was like “if she just loves him more, if he can feel a truly loving hand for the first time, he will drop all of this weird dominance crap and realise how a relationship should be” Ahhh. The story of my 20s. Toxic toxic toxic 🙈
Totally agree with masculine toxicity! I tried reading the book but I couldn't. I've watched all 3 movies!
Brilliant work!
Spot on!!!! Well done, you got this exactly right
The most I have been able to read of this trash was 20 pages. The movie is just terrible overall. If Christian had been a person of color, the world would have said that he was a sexual predator. But thanks to his whiteness, he gets a pass and is celebrated as a great and protective lover. I remember Melanie Griffith when was asked about the movie in an interview. Dakota Johson was next to her. There was an awkward silence, you could tell the mother was embarrassed and tried very hard not to say something she would regret later. lol This image has stayed with me since. It's too bad because Dakota is a good actress. I'm glad she picked better movies after that.
Haha great. I can't get myself to watch the movies let alone read the book... Great critique
I'm glad someone took down the mighty book pusher EL, lol!