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By Mark GrahamPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
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What if noon was midnight and midnight was noon? Would we be eating lunch in the dark and sleeping during the day? Will the birds still sing at night as they do during the day? Day into night or will be night into day. One must think what if? Actually, some do this out of choice or necessity. So, what is time really all about. Is it really about keeping a schedule or just a way to keep us somewhat organized about our lives? A plan as such to keep us steady as we go about living our daily lives.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Cindy Calder4 months ago

    I love the premise of your drabble, Mark. It certainly makes for interesting conversation.

  • Marie381Uk 4 months ago

    Suppose a night worker know this answer I did12 hr nights when I was nursing. 8am was breakfast wash uniform. House work prepare evening meal ready to cook. Sleep 12 am till 4.30 pm when I could then back work for 7. Hubby worked 8 am till 5pm seen him 2 hours a day but days off we got caravan ready and went to wales a few days ora week.😊😝

  • Some fantastical pondering! Half the time I don’t know whether it’s day or night or what day it is… So get me mixed up even more by redistributing night to day and day to night and I will be walking upside down. Good work, Mark!

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    I love your mindset, Mark. Now you've given me something to think about.

  • Caitlin Charlton4 months ago

    I saw this pop up. But then I had no idea what it was going to be about. So great title. Love how - even though this was written in long sentences. Wedded into a paragraph. It had the markings of poetry. The sound of beats and rhythm. I loved it. Nicely done Mark. 🤗❤️

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