"The Train Killer"

The year is 1996. The Karakoram Express cuts through the cold darkness between Lahore and Karachi. Onboard is a mix of ordinary passengers: families, soldiers, businessmen, and one man with a secret.

Zafar Iqbal, a former intelligence officer, now disavowed and presumed dead, has assumed a new identity. He wears a faded trench coat and carries an old leather briefcase. No one knows that inside it lies a custom-made silenced pistol and a list of names.

He isn’t here by accident.

The target is Rehmat Shah, a corrupt arms dealer and traitor to the state, currently hiding in plain sight as a sugar mill investor traveling in First Class. Zafar’s mission: eliminate him before the train reaches Rohri Junction—quietly, without causing panic.

Zafar boards from Faisalabad, slipping through unnoticed, a silent shadow among the weary travelers.

TENSION:

The journey begins smoothly, but as night falls, the mood shifts.

Zafar scopes the compartments. Every passenger is a potential witness. The train guard passes frequently. A nosy child keeps peeking into cabins. Time is ticking, and Shah is heavily guarded by two ex-military men posing as assistants.

At 2:45 a.m., just after Multan, the train slows near a remote signal. Zafar decides to move.

As he walks down the corridor, heart pounding, an unexpected interruption: a police constable doing a routine check. Zafar ducks into a lavatory, heart racing, hand gripping the

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The Train Killer: A Silent Passenger with a Deadly Mission

The rhythmic clatter of wheels on the tracks echoed through the narrow corridors of the Karakoram Express. It was a cold December night in 1996, and the train snaked its way from Lahore to Karachi, shrouded in darkness and mist. Inside, passengers were bundled in shawls and blankets, some snoring, others murmuring quietly. The train, like time, moved forward — indifferent, inevitable.

In Coach C-7, Zafar Iqbal sat near the window, a shadow among shadows. He wore a faded trench coat, a wool cap pulled low, and a long scarf covering most of his face. Nothing about him stood out — just another tired traveler trying to make his way south.

But Zafar wasn’t tired. He wasn’t even a traveler.

He was on a mission.

Underneath the bench where he sat, hidden inside an old leather bag, was a silenced 9mm pistol. Next to it, a folded file with the name: Rehmat Shah. Former intelligence asset. Now turned arms trafficker and political fixer for those who thrived in chaos. A man responsible for bombings, betrayals, and the deaths of innocent civilians.

Zafar’s orders were clear: Terminate Shah before the train reaches Rohri Junction.

Zafar had once been a legend within the intelligence community — a ghost, a master of silent kills, trained to vanish like smoke. But after a botched operation in Peshawar, he had been declared rogue, expendable. What they didn’t know was that Zafar had survived, going underground for two years. Now, he was back. Not for redemption. For justice.

The First Clue

Zafar’s eyes scanned the corridor. The train swayed gently. An old man coughed two cabins down. A tea vendor passed through with a dull voice: “Chai... garam chai...”

At 2:07 a.m., the train crossed into Multan. Zafar used the brief stop to stretch and observe. Outside, moonlight reflected off the tracks. Inside, he located his target’s cabin — C-1, first class — guarded by two bulky men pretending to be assistants. Rehmat Shah, according to the file, had changed his appearance: shorter hair, trimmed beard, glasses. But his arrogance would remain the same.

Zafar returned to his seat. His plan was simple: wait until the dead of night, infiltrate C-1 during the scheduled power cut at 3:15 a.m., and eliminate the target quietly.

But fate had other ideas.

Tension Builds

At 2:45 a.m., Zafar made his move. He walked down the aisle casually, holding a newspaper and a cup of tea. Just as he approached the first-class section, a railway constable appeared from the opposite side, patrolling.

“Bhai, aap kahan ja rahe ho?” the constable asked, suspicious.

Zafar smiled faintly, adopting a Balti accent. “C-2 mein dost hai... bas chai dene jaa raha hoon.”

The constable frowned. “Itni raat ko?”

Zafar leaned in, whispered conspiratorially. “Uski tabiyat kharab hai. Vomiting ho rahi thi. Dar gaya hai bechara.”

The constable nodded, slightly disarmed. “Theek hai, lekin zyada der mat rukna.”

Zafar moved on, heart pounding but face calm. He reached C-1 and quickly scoped the layout. The bodyguards were asleep — or pretending. The door to the inner compartment was locked.

He slid back into the shadows and waited.

The Strike

At exactly 3:15 a.m., as expected, the power flickered. A scheduled switch from one grid zone to another plunged the corridor into near-darkness for 90 seconds.

Zafar moved like a wraith.

He picked the lock with a tiny wire and entered the cabin silently. Rehmat Shah lay on his side, snoring softly, oblivious to the ghost standing beside him.

Zafar raised the pistol.

But before he could pull the trigger, Shah’s eyes flew open.

“You,” Shah whispered, stunned. “I know you...”

Zafar didn’t answer. He aimed for the heart — and fired.

Thwip.

Thwip.

Two suppressed shots. Shah gasped, choked, then slumped, lifeless. The silencer had done its job — barely a whisper. But one of the guards stirred.

Zafar moved fast, opening the window of the compartment. A cold wind rushed in. He reached into Shah’s pocket, pulling out a USB drive and a note marked with coordinates — possibly a weapons cache.

The guard outside knocked. “Sahab? Sab theek hai?”

Zafar didn’t answer. He grabbed a bottle of whiskey from the side table, poured it over Shah’s body, and lit it with a match. Flames rose instantly.

The guard burst in, screaming, but the fire disoriented him. In the chaos, Zafar leapt through the open window into the night — rolling hard onto a patch of gravel beside the tracks.

Payoff

The next morning, newspapers reported a fire-related accident on the Karakoram Express. A wealthy businessman had died in his cabin, apparently drunk and careless. His assistants claimed they saw nothing until the fire was already out of control.

There was no mention of an assassin. No gunshots. No USB. Just another tragedy in a country used to forgetting names and burying secrets.

Meanwhile, deep in a safehouse in Hyderabad, Zafar plugged the USB into a secure laptop. Maps, transactions, emails — all leading to something bigger. A network far beyond Rehmat Shah. His mission wasn’t over.

Not yet.

He sipped his tea and stared at the screen, a faint smile playing on his lips.

The ghost had returned. And the war was just beginning.