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The Eye Behind the Keyhole

Every secret watches back.

By Ghalib KhanPublished 2 months ago 2 min read

The house was silent that night — old wood breathing like it remembered too much. The wind outside whispered against the walls, and every creak carried a story the floorboards had been trying to forget.

In the hallway, one door stood slightly apart from the rest. It wasn’t locked, but something about it told me not to enter. The brass keyhole glimmered faintly in the dark, like a tiny golden eye daring me to come closer.

And I did.

When I leaned forward, I felt the chill of the metal brush against my skin. For a moment, there was nothing — just the smell of dust and the soft hum of silence. Then, out of the darkness inside, an eye opened.

It wasn’t mine.

It was looking back.

That’s when I realized something strange about secrets — they don’t belong to anyone. They live in the spaces between what we see and what we imagine. They breathe in whispers, in glances, in the pause between two truths.

I used to believe that knowing something gave you power. But when I saw that eye staring back at me, I understood the price of curiosity. The more you seek, the more you’re seen.

Maybe that’s what fear really is — not the darkness itself, but the moment you realize the darkness has been watching you all along.

The next morning, I tried to forget it. I told myself it was just a trick of light, a reflection, a dream caught halfway between sleep and memory. But deep down, I knew the truth: once you’ve looked through the keyhole, you can’t unsee what’s behind it.

Days turned into weeks, and the house seemed to change with me. The shadows grew longer. The silence felt heavier. Every mirror seemed to tilt just slightly when I walked by. Sometimes, at night, I’d hear a faint tapping sound — like fingernails brushing wood from the other side of the door.

One night, I found the courage to go back.

The keyhole was there, waiting, patient. Like it knew I would return.

I knelt down and looked again.

This time, there was no eye.

Just darkness.

And in that darkness, a reflection — mine, and yet not mine at all.

It smiled.

I stepped back, heart pounding. My breath echoed in the hallway like someone else was breathing with me. I wanted to run, but something held me still — that strange feeling that the watcher and the watched had somehow changed places.

Maybe that’s what happens when you stare too long into secrets: you become one.

Now, when I walk past that door, I never look. I keep my eyes forward, my steps quiet. But sometimes, when the night is too still, I can feel it — that quiet gaze behind the wood, waiting.

The truth is, we all have a keyhole. A small opening between who we are and what we hide. And sometimes, the things we think we’re looking for… are just waiting for a chance to look back.

So the next time you find a locked door, ask yourself — do you really want to see what’s behind it?

Because once the eye behind the keyhole sees you… it never forgets.

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About the Creator

Ghalib Khan

my name is Ghalib Khan I'm Pakistani.I lived Saudi Arabia and I'm a BA pass student

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