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Point of view "Killer Instincts" and "The fear victim"

Psychological thriller short story about a serial killer's obsession with the thrill of the hunt and the power of taking a life.

By pbPublished 3 years ago 3 min read
Point of view "Killer Instincts" and "The fear victim"
Photo by Ermia Ramez on Unsplash

Victims Point of view:

It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining, and the birds were singing. I decided to stop at a coffee shop to grab a quick drink before continuing on with my day. I placed my order and waited patiently for my coffee to be prepared.

Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder, and I turned around to see a stranger smiling at me. He struck up a conversation and we talked for a while. I felt comfortable around him, and we chatted as if we were old friends.

As our conversation came to a close, he said goodbye and left the coffee shop. I didn't think much of it at the time, but looking back, something about the interaction seemed off. I couldn't quite put my finger on it, but I had a feeling that I had just narrowly avoided a dangerous situation.

I continued on with my day, feeling grateful for the beautiful weather and the chance to enjoy it. However, I couldn't shake the feeling of unease that lingered within me. I realized that I needed to be more cautious and aware of my surroundings, especially when encountering strangers.

From that day forward, I made a point to pay closer attention to those around me, and to trust my instincts when something didn't feel right. I learned that even in the midst of a beautiful day, danger can still lurk around the corner, and it's up to us to stay vigilant and protect ourselves.

Killer's Point of view:

It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining, and the birds were singing. But I wasn't interested in any of that. I was on the hunt for my next target, and nothing else mattered.

I had been tracking her for days, watching her every move, studying her habits, and analyzing her weaknesses. She was a woman in her late thirties, smart, successful, and confident. But she was also vulnerable, and I knew I could use that to my advantage.

I followed her from a distance, keeping my distance and blending in with the crowd. I knew how to be unassuming, how to avoid drawing attention, and how to get close without raising suspicion.

As I watched her, I couldn't help but feel a sense of excitement. This was what I lived for, the thrill of the chase, the rush of the kill. But I knew I had to be patient, bide my time, and wait for the right opportunity.

And then, it happened. She stopped at a coffee shop to grab a quick drink, and I saw my chance. I followed her inside, pretending to be a customer, and waited for my moment.

As she ordered her drink, I stepped up behind her, my heart pounding with anticipation. I could feel the adrenaline pumping through my veins, the rush of excitement. And then, I reached out and touched her shoulder.

She turned around, startled, and looked at me with surprise. I smiled at her, trying to appear friendly and approachable. I struck up a conversation, and we started chatting as if we were old friends.

We talked for a while, and I could see that she was starting to relax around me. She seemed to be enjoying my company, and I could sense that she was letting her guard down.

And then, it was over. I said goodbye and left the coffee shop, knowing that I had accomplished my mission. I didn't have to hurt anyone, didn't have to take a life. All I had to do was make a connection, gain her trust, and then disappear into the crowd.

I walked away, feeling a sense of satisfaction. Another mission accomplished, another target taken down. It was a good day, and I couldn't wait for the next one.

Conclusion:

As the day drew to a close, both the victim and the killer went about their lives, completely unaware of the danger that had been lurking just beneath the surface. The victim had learned an important lesson about staying vigilant and trusting her instincts, while the killer continued to live his life in pursuit of his next target.

But as the sun set on that beautiful day, one thing was certain: the world was a dangerous place, and it was up to each individual to do what they could to protect themselves from harm. Whether it was by staying aware of their surroundings, listening to their intuition, or simply being cautious when encountering strangers, everyone had a role to play in keeping themselves safe. And as long as there were people like the killer out there, that responsibility would only grow more important with each passing day.

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About the Creator

pb

Hi this is pb, Photography/Explorer/Gamer/now beginner of story writing,

Masters in Business Administration.

Suppor me for the high.

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