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Overboard

The Shadow

By Dagmar GoeschickPublished about a year ago 4 min read
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The sun dropped low on the horizon, sending a warm, golden glow across the huge ocean. The Seraphine, a sleek and graceful boat, moved through the water with the grace of a dancer, leaving a path of white foam in its wake. Even though the evening was beautiful, the atmosphere on deck was tight. The wind delivered the aroma of salt and the distant cry of seagulls, but neither could detract from the smoldering strife among the passengers.

Captain Harris, a seasoned sailor with weathered skin and piercing eyes, stood at the helm, his hands firmly on the wheel. He'd been hired to accompany the wealthy Devereux family on a week-long cruise around the Caribbean, but what was supposed to be a relaxing vacation had soon turned into something far darker.

"Where's Lily?" Evelyn Devereux inquired, her voice filled with concern. She was a striking woman in her late forties, with auburn hair floating in the breeze. Her usually bright eyes were clouded with dread as she studied the deck.

"She was with you, wasn't she?" said her husband, Charles Devereux, a guy with a stern expression and temperament to match. He had always been the sort to take control of any situation, but even he appeared rattled.

"She went below deck a few minutes ago," Evelyn murmured, looking at the cabin door. "But she isn't there now. "I checked."

Captain Harris remained silent, his gaze fixed on the horizon. He knew better than to get involved in the family's problems, but the tension between the Devereuxes was too strong to ignore.

"Lily!" Evelyn called out again, this time louder, and her voice echoed across the sea.

Suddenly, the stateroom door sprang open, and Lily Devereux stumbled onto the deck. She was only eighteen years old, yet her beauty drew attention wherever she went. But now her face was pale, and her eyes were wide with terror.

"Mom, Dad, you need to see this," she continued, her voice shaking.

"What is it, darling?" Evelyn inquired, hurrying to her daughter's side.

Lily led them into the cabin, where a little laptop was on the table. The screen showed a video stream of the yacht's interior, obtained by the security cameras Charles insisted on installing."Look," Lily exclaimed, pointing at the screen.

The footage showed Lily entering the cabin a few minutes earlier, as she had stated. But then the footage glitched, and for a short second, the figure in the video wasn't Lily at all—it was a towering, shadowy man with his face concealed.

"What the hell?" Charles murmured and leaned in closer. "That's not possible."

"It's been happening all day," Lily said quietly. "I keep seeing things—people who are not present. "I thought I was going crazy."

"Captain," Charles yelled, turning to face Harris. "What's going on here?"

Harris scowled and stepped into the cabin for a closer look. He had heard of unusual incidents at sea—superstitions, ghost stories—but he had never placed much trust in them. But suddenly, as the creepy figure flickered on the screen, he felt a shiver run down his spine.

"I don't know," Harris said, his voice low. "But we need to be cool. Panic will not assist us."

As they stood there, trying to make sense of what they had witnessed, the boat rocked to one side. The force threw them off balance, and Lily screamed as she was slammed into the open door.

"Lily!" Evelyn shouted and reached out to catch her, but it was too late. Lily fell back, her foot snagging on the edge of the door frame. Time seemed to slow as she teetered on the edge, her arms reaching madly for something to grab onto.

"Grab her!" Charles yelled, lunging forward.

However, in that brief second, the yacht rocked again, this time harder, and Lily lost her footing altogether. With a final, desperate cry, she fell over the railing and into the dark, churning seas below.

"Lily!" Evelyn shouted and dashed to the edge of the deck, her eyes wide with terror as she watched her daughter disappear into the sea.

Captain Harris leaped into action, his heart racing. He shouted commands to his crew, who rushed to deploy life preservers and prepare the lifeboat. However, the sea was turbulent, and the diminishing light made it almost hard to see anything in the water.

"Over there!" Charles cried, anxiously pointing to a location where he believed he saw something—a flash of movement, possibly a hand.

However, as they searched, it became evident that Lily had disappeared. The ocean had taken her whole, leaving only the sound of waves pounding against the Seraphine's hull.

Evelyn sank to her knees and sobbed furiously. Charles stood still, his expression one of amazement and disbelief. Captain Harris felt a huge weight sink onto his chest. He'd seen plenty of things at sea, but nothing like this.

As the crew resumed their search, a sense of foreboding descended on the yacht. The mystery of the shadowy person, the weird events, and now Lily's disappearance all seemed linked, as if something evil and malevolent had taken possession of their journey.

But there were no answers in the sea's darkness, only harsh, cruel seas that had taken a life far too soon. The Seraphine continued sailing, but the memory of that terrible evening haunted them all for the rest of their lives, a chilling reminder of the unseen powers lurking beneath the surface.

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Well done. Nice telling.

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