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Haunted room

By zaraPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Horror story
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Once upon a time there used to be a closed Hotel in Pakistan it was closed for about 16 years and it was very famous about that hotel that there are many evil spirits and demons one day 4 friends Suban, kriti, Aisha and meenu went there and wanted to discover that hotel so they went in it was about 1am at night when they went in that mall they were exploring the hotel when they discover a closed room it was closed with a big lock and its door was extremely heavy and dirty as well. All 4 friends tried to open that door but it didnt opened so kriti said 'Guys come on leave this shitty door we should go upstairs there must be something exciting to see' when she said that all friends laugh and went upstairs there they found a chair which was burned Suban went ahead to move that chair aside but he got a current and fell down everyone was in shock and suban said 'guys i think we should go downstairs' they all went down in hurry and saw that heavy closed door opened and that chair which was upstairs they saw it in that room they all were now worried meenu said ' i will go inside that room first to see who opened that room' meenu went inside with worry on her face and was very scared when she went inside all hotel lights went out and they heard a very scary laugh and after that they heard meenu shouting they can not see anything as it was all dark after sometimes all hotel lights were on again and what they saw was unbelievable they saw meenu dead on floor her eyes were bleeding they all were shouting and crying they went back to the hotel entrance to go out but they found nothing there but a wall they all were scared and were crying they were regretting the decision of getting into this hotel they all checked there phone and there were no signals while crying Aisha said' guys whoever is this will kill all of us. I dont want to die' they all were sitting when suddenly Aisha gets a call and the username said it was ''JULIE'' there were no signals and Aisha recieved a call which was weird she answered it and asked her 'what do you want from us tell us we will help you but please dont kill us' Julie replied 'it was your wish to come here and its my wish to kill all of you' and the call ended and someone pulled Aisha from her feet and took her to that room where Meenu was found dead they all ran towards her but the door was closed. Now there are only two left kriti and suban then suban receive a call from same username he picked it up and said' please dont do this to us why are you doing this to us and why you are taking all of us in that room stop this' Julie replied 'i was burned to death in that room of this hotel i was also killed why should i leave you' and the call ended Suban and kriti think alot on this and came to conclusion that if they burn that chair Julie will be gone forever because all her powers are in that chair and in that room so now both of then were in search of petrol, matchbox or lighter they went to hotel kitchen and after searching alot kriti found a lighter and suban found petrol now they both ran towards that room and suddenly they saw aisha coming out from that room she was crying kriti ran towards aisha but suban said to her 'dont go close to her she is not aisha' but kriti still ran towards her and hug her when she hugged her aisha face changed into someone very scary she poked her big nails into kritis neck and toot all her veins out and also took her to that room now suban was the only one left he cried and then gathered the hope to get out of this hotel he spreaded the petrol all over room and then turned the lighter on and throw it in the room suddenly petrol catches the fire and everything started to burn suban who was standing outside the room hears julie screaming when that chair was burning suban ran to the hotel entrance now there was a door and not a wall and opened the door and ran out while crying he missed his friends but he escaped and that hotel was burned.

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  • WOAabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed the story. But something that also struck me is that though the grammar is out of sorts and its hard to read without paragraph breaks, the fact that these two things were true told me that this wasn't AI writing. I am so exhausted wading through AI writing that I only want to read original authentic writing, which I could tell this is.

  • Shahnaz Akhtarabout a year ago

    Nicee😭🙏but everyone should be alive

  • Maryam Noorabout a year ago

    Seems realistic🤫👍

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