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A Criminal Movie Story of Loyalty, Betrayal, and Revenge

The Last Job

By FarzadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read
Betrayal burned deeper than the bullets.

A black Range Rover speeds through the neon-soaked streets of Chicago at night. Inside, Dominic Raye—ex-military, ex-con—is gripping the wheel with blood on his hands and rage in his eyes. Sirens echo in the background. He’s not running from the cops.

He’s chasing the man who betrayed him.

Cut to 24 hours earlier.

Act I – The Setup

Dominic Raye is out of the game.

He did ten years in federal prison for a bank job that left one man dead and two million dollars never recovered. Now 42, he works as a mechanic in a South Side garage, trying to keep his head low.

But trouble always finds him.

Miles Gentry, his former crew leader—and best friend—shows up one night with an offer Dominic can’t ignore.

"One last job. Clean. No violence. Just in and out."

The target? A high-stakes underground vault hidden beneath an elite private casino run by the Ukrainian mob.

The prize? Over $20 million in laundered cash, untraceable.

The team?

Miles – The brain

Tasha – Tech expert and safecracker

Leo – Getaway driver and explosives

Dominic – Muscle and strategy

Dominic says no.

But then he finds out his younger brother, Raymond, owes a drug debt to the mob—the same mob that runs the casino.

If Dominic doesn’t pay, Raymond dies.

He’s in.

Act II – The Heist

The crew spends a week preparing.

Tasha hacks security codes.

Leo maps the underground tunnels beneath the casino.

Miles plays poker with the mob boss to buy time and gain access.

The night of the job, everything goes smoothly—at first.

They slip in through the tunnels.

Tasha cracks the vault in under six minutes.

They bag the cash.

But as they head for the exit—something goes wrong.

The silent alarm was never cut.

Cops swarm the area. Leo is shot during the escape. Tasha gets pinned and arrested. Miles and Dominic barely escape with the cash.

They hide out in a safehouse downtown.

Dominic is furious.

“You said no alarms. You said it was clean.”

Miles looks shaken.

“I don’t know what happened. I swear.”

But Dominic has a bad feeling—and he’s right.

Act III – The Betrayal

Dominic discovers a burner phone hidden in Miles' jacket.

He listens to a voicemail.

“Good work, Gentry. You get your cut once Raye is gone. No loose ends.”

It’s the mob boss.

Miles sold him out.

The job was a setup. The cash was real—but the goal was to eliminate Dominic, the one man who knew where the original missing $2 million from ten years ago was hidden.

Dominic had buried it in an abandoned steel mill, and never told a soul.

Now Miles wants both scores.

Dominic loses it.

They fight.

Gun drawn. Fists flying.

But Miles escapes, stealing both bags of cash and leaving Dominic bleeding in the alley behind the safehouse.

Act IV – The Revenge

Dominic patches himself up and goes to the only person he can trust—Tasha’s cousin, Lex, a street informant with ties in every gang from Chicago to Detroit.

Lex finds out Miles is planning to flee the country from a private airstrip at 2 a.m.

Dominic gears up.

One pistol. One knife. One shot at redemption.

Final Scene: The Airstrip Showdown

Rain pours.

The runway lights flicker.

Miles is loading the bags into a black jet when Dominic steps into the floodlights.

“Going somewhere?”

Miles smirks.

“You should’ve stayed retired.”

“You should’ve stayed loyal.”

They fight—savage, brutal, real.

Dominic gets shot in the shoulder but tackles Miles before he can board. They wrestle in the mud. Finally, Dominic pins him.

“You killed Leo. You left Tasha. You tried to kill me.”

“It was never about you!” Miles shouts. “It was about surviving.”

Dominic says nothing.

Just pulls the trigger.

Miles falls.

Dominic leaves the body, takes one bag of money, and disappears into the night before police arrive.

Epilogue

Six months later.

In a quiet coastal town in Mexico, Dominic runs a small auto shop by the ocean.

He watches the sun rise, sipping coffee, a faint scar on his neck and peace in his eyes.

Tasha, now out on bail, sends him postcards with no return address.

Raymond is clean, working in a community center.

And the $2 million from ten years ago?

Still buried.

Waiting for no one.

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About the Creator

Farzad

I write A best history story for read it see and read my story in injoy it .

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