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The Day Time Stood Still

One moment, one choice—and everything changed forever

By Muhammad HashimPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

The sky over the city was unusually quiet that Thursday afternoon. Crowds bustled through crosswalks. Street musicians played their tired melodies. Somewhere, a siren wailed faintly in the distance. But none of that registered in Elena’s mind.

She stood at the entrance of Glenridge Hospital, clutching the letter in her hand so tightly that the paper had begun to crinkle at the corners. Her mother’s handwriting was unmistakable—elegant, slanted, and deliberate. But it wasn’t a letter of comfort or affection.

It was a confession.

The kind that makes the ground shift beneath your feet.

Elena had grown up believing her father had died in a car accident when she was five. Her mother had never spoken much about it—just enough to silence the questions. She’d grown up angry, not at anyone in particular, but at fate. At the idea of loss. At how much someone could miss a person they didn’t even remember.

But the letter revealed a different truth.

Her father hadn’t died. He had left. Vanished. And now, twenty-one years later, he was here—in the very hospital Elena had passed a hundred times without knowing.

Room 408. Terminal cancer. Stage IV.

The nurse at the front desk smiled gently as Elena approached. “Are you here to see Mr. Hale?”

She nodded.

“He’s awake today. Not talking much. But he’s aware.”

Elena’s legs felt like stone as she stepped into the elevator. As it climbed, so did her heartbeat.

Room 408.

She turned the knob slowly, half-hoping he’d be asleep. But he wasn’t. He was awake, eyes open, looking out the window as if expecting the sky to offer him some kind of answer.

He turned as she entered. His face was thin, gaunt. The kind of face life had taken too much from—but the eyes were unmistakable. She had those eyes.

“Elena,” he said, barely above a whisper.

She froze. “How do you know my name?”

“I’ve known it every day since I left,” he said. “I... I wasn’t allowed to write. Your mother made sure of that.”

The anger boiled inside her chest, but something else stirred too. Confusion. Longing. Rage mixed with an unbearable ache.

“I came to ask why,” she said.

He took a breath that rattled in his lungs. “Because I was afraid I’d ruin you. And I think I already had.”

That wasn’t the answer she wanted. She wanted fury. She wanted excuses. She wanted someone to blame. But not this—this fragile, dying truth.

The moment stretched between them, too heavy to fill with words.

And then, the clock on the wall ticked once—and stopped.

Everything froze.

The humming from the machines went silent. The flickering fluorescent light stopped blinking. Even the tree branch outside the window, caught in mid-sway, stilled.

Elena stood. The paper in her hand was still warm from her grip.

“Hello?” she said, unsure.

From the hallway, footsteps approached—soft, deliberate.

A woman entered the room. Dressed in grey, her hair flowing like silk, and her eyes ancient.

“Elena Hale,” she said calmly.

Elena instinctively stepped back. “Who are you?”

“Time,” the woman replied. “Or a version of it.”

“What is this?” Elena asked, heart racing.

“A moment,” she said, looking around. “Your moment. Some decisions ripple farther than others. When the soul hesitates, time listens.”

“I didn’t ask for this.”

“No. But you needed it.” The woman stepped closer, kind but not soft. “You have a choice. What you say—or don’t say—right now will echo in every tomorrow you live.”

“I don’t know if I can forgive him,” Elena whispered.

“Then don’t.” Time tilted her head. “Forgiveness isn’t a gift for the one who hurt you. It’s freedom for the one who carries the hurt.”

Elena looked at her father. The frail man she had imagined a thousand ways. He had not been there for birthdays, scraped knees, the death of her mother. And yet, here he was. Just a man. Not a monster. Not a ghost.

“What if I say nothing?” she asked.

“Then silence will be your inheritance.”

Elena nodded slowly. Her throat tightened. The rage began to unravel—not disappear, but loosen enough for something else to enter.

“I hated you,” she said aloud. Her father didn’t respond—frozen as he was—but speaking was enough. “I needed you and you weren’t there. But I’m tired of carrying that weight.”

She stepped to the bed and placed the crumpled letter on the nightstand. “So I’m leaving this here. And I’m not walking out bitter. That’s the only part I get to choose.”

The woman in grey smiled.

“Good,” she said. And vanished.

With a sharp tick, the clock resumed. The machines beeped softly. The branch outside swayed again in the breeze.

Her father blinked. “What happened?”

Elena just smiled faintly. “Just a long pause.”

And for the first time in years, she walked away—not empty, not broken—but lighter.

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