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Whispers Beneath the Willow

Some secrets are never buried—they grow with the roots.

By Qaisar JanPublished 9 months ago 3 min read

Elara stepped out of the old pickup truck and stared at the village of Elderglen, a forgotten place nestled between forested hills and fog-covered valleys. Her father had driven them here in silence, the same silence that had swallowed their home since her mother disappeared three months ago.

The town looked like something from a forgotten painting—stone cottages, ivy-covered fences, and a looming presence at the far end of the river: a towering willow tree with branches that nearly kissed the water.

The locals called it The Mourning Tree.

They said it whispered.

Elara had read those whispers in her mother’s journal, entries written in hurried script, scattered between botanical sketches and symbols Elara didn’t recognize. “The willow remembers,” her mother wrote. “She’s there. Bound, but not forgotten.”

She didn’t understand it then. But she would.

That night, while her father unpacked boxes in the cottage, Elara wandered to the river. The willow stood in moonlight, its twisted trunk black against the silver glow. She heard it then—a soft whisper. It wasn’t the wind. It was a voice. Faint, like someone speaking from behind a closed door.

“Elara,” it breathed.

She froze.

The voice wasn’t frightening. It was sad. Hollow. Ancient.

She returned the next day with her mother’s journal, following the clues: "Beneath the scar, beneath the roots, she waits." Elara searched the bark until her fingers touched a long, smooth groove. Not a natural scar—something carved long ago.

With a small spade, she dug.

Hours passed before her shovel hit something solid: a box, bound in iron, covered in dirt and moss. Inside, she found letters written in a language she half-understood. And a locket. Her mother’s. The same one she wore the night she disappeared.

She clutched it to her chest as the whispers returned—louder this time.

“Free her,” they pleaded.

“See what they did.”

And Elara did.

She saw flashes. Not dreams—memories. A woman in a green cloak standing trial before frightened villagers. Cries of “Witch!” and “Curse!” A fire. A scream that split the sky.

Her name was Avenya. A healer. A woman who knew the earth's language. They feared her, so they chained her spirit to the willow with blood magic. And they silenced her with lies.

Elara learned the truth. Her mother hadn’t vanished—she had tried to unbind Avenya’s spirit and failed. But she left behind clues so Elara could finish what she started.

The spirit began to stir. Elderglen’s air grew heavy. The townsfolk whispered about “bad dreams,” strange sightings, and shadows that moved without light. Some remembered old sins and grew restless.

Elara returned to the willow on the night of the red moon—the same moon from her visions. The tree trembled as she opened the box again, holding the locket high. The ground cracked. Roots rose like arms. And the spirit of Avenya emerged—smoke and sorrow shaped like a woman.

"You came," the spirit said, a hundred voices in one.

“I know the truth,” Elara replied. “You were never a curse.”

The spirit bowed her head. “And yet, they buried me like one.”

Elara stepped forward. “Then let me unbury you.”

With the locket as a key and her mother’s words as a guide, Elara performed the Rite of Release—not of sealing, but of forgiveness. Avenya’s form flickered, her features returning.

Tears streamed down Elara’s cheeks as the spirit whispered a final time: “Thank you for listening.”

Then, she was gone.

The willow shuddered once, and then stood still. No more whispers. Just peace.

In the days that followed, Elderglen began to change. The willow bloomed for the first time in memory—its leaves golden and glowing at dawn. Villagers who once feared it now laid flowers at its roots. And Elara? She stayed.

She kept her mother’s journal and added pages of her own. She listened when others didn’t. She remembered what others forgot.

Because the past doesn’t fade—it waits.

And sometimes, it just wants to be heard.

Moral of the Story:

The truth may sleep beneath lies, but it cannot be buried forever. Only by listening to the past and facing it with compassion can we break the curses we inherit.

Autobiography

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Qaisar Jan

Storyteller and article writer, crafting words that inspire, challenge, and connect. Dive into meaningful content that leaves an impact.

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