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The Last Push"

When Giving Up Was Easy, He Chose to Keep Going

By Qaisar JanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read




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The Last Push

When Giving Up Was Easy, He Chose to Keep Going

It was the final lap of the race—one that Rayan had been preparing for his entire teenage life. The national championship was more than just a competition to him. It was a lifeline. A way out. A door to a future that he and his mother had dreamed of since his father left them in a crumbling house in a forgotten part of the city.

From a young age, Rayan had shown an extraordinary talent for long-distance running. His school coach noticed it first, amazed at how the boy never seemed to tire, no matter how many laps he ran. But what people didn't see was the why. Rayan ran not just for medals or records—he ran to escape the noise, the hunger, the pain of watching his mother sew clothes late into the night just to afford his school shoes.

As the championship day arrived, everything seemed to be working against him.

His only pair of running shoes had worn thin. His right leg had been aching for a week, and the pain refused to subside even after rest. Worst of all, his mother had fallen ill just days before the event, and Rayan had spent those nights sitting by her side, feeding her broth and keeping her warm.

But he showed up.

The stadium buzzed with energy. Elite runners from across the country warmed up, coaches barked instructions, and the crowd roared in anticipation. Rayan stood quietly at the starting line, eyes on the track, heart pounding. The 10,000-meter race was long—twenty-five laps around the track—and he knew it would test every ounce of his will.

The gunshot cracked through the air. They were off.

For the first ten laps, Rayan kept a steady pace. He was in the middle of the pack, observing, conserving. His breathing was rhythmic, his steps measured. He remembered what his coach once told him: “Don’t show your strength too early. Let the race come to you.”

By the fifteenth lap, the real runners began to separate from the hopefuls. One by one, competitors began to fall behind. Rayan pushed forward, pain starting to shoot through his leg with every step. He bit his lip, not to cry out, but to stay focused.

At lap twenty, only four runners remained in the lead pack. Rayan was one of them.

Suddenly, on the next curve, his foot caught slightly on the track's edge. His body lurched. For a terrifying moment, he stumbled, arms flailing to regain balance. The runner behind him passed him instantly. The others widened the gap.

He was now in fourth.

Spectators gasped. Some sighed, assuming it was over. But something deep inside Rayan refused to quit. Maybe it was the echo of his mother’s voice that morning: “Run like you have nothing to lose, my son. Because we’ve already lost so much.”

With three laps remaining, Rayan told himself this was not just a race—it was his race. He dug deep. His legs burned. His chest felt like it would explode. But he pushed.

One lap left.

He was still fourth, but the third-place runner was slowing. The second seemed fatigued. The leader was strong, but not unreachable.

And then, something miraculous happened.

A memory flashed: him as a child, racing barefoot on dusty roads, laughing even though his stomach was empty. His mother clapping on the porch, saying, “You're faster than the wind, my boy.”

He smiled.

It was the last 300 meters. He surged forward.

Third place—passed.

Second place—closing in.

The leader, now just ten meters ahead.

The crowd was on its feet, roaring, some shouting his name, many not even knowing who he was but sensing greatness in the making.

Final 100 meters.

His leg screamed in pain. His lungs burned. His vision blurred. But Rayan found one last push. Not from his body. From his heart.

He passed the second runner with a defiant stride. The leader, just a few steps ahead, looked back—startled. He hadn't expected the boy from nowhere to challenge him.

And in the final 20 meters, Rayan gave everything.

He crossed the finish line just 0.3 seconds ahead. Then he collapsed.

The stadium exploded in cheers.

His coach ran to him, tears in his eyes. “You did it, Rayan. You really did it.”

But Rayan wasn’t listening. He was staring at the sky, smiling, whispering, “Mama, I did it.”


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Three Months Later

Rayan was featured in newspapers, praised for his resilience, invited to international training camps. Sponsors came forward. He could now afford better gear, medical treatment, and even a new house for his mother.

But when asked in interviews about his training or techniques, he always said the same thing:

"It wasn’t my legs that won the race. It was my will. It was that last push."


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Qaisar Jan

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