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The Haunting of Old Ravenwood House

The Haunting of Old Ravenwood House

By MahalakshmiPublished about a year ago 5 min read

The Haunting of Old Ravenwood House

The Legend

In the quiet town of Eldridge, nestled between rolling hills and dense woods, stood the infamous Old Ravenwood House. The crumbling structure had long been the subject of local lore. They said it was haunted by the spirit of a woman named Eliza, who vanished on the eve of her wedding in the late 1800s. Tales of her sorrowful wails echoed through the town, and many claimed to have seen her ghost wandering the grounds, her wedding dress flowing behind her like mist.

Three teenagers—Jai, Maha, and Adhiran—were drawn to the legend like moths to a flame. They had spent countless weekends scouring the town’s library for clues about Eliza’s fate, and now they felt ready for their first real adventure: a night in the haunted house.

The Plan

It was a chilly autumn evening when they decided to embark on their quest. Leaves crunched beneath their feet as they made their way to the house, the sun setting behind them, casting elongated shadows that danced eerily across the ground.

“Are you sure about this?” Maha asked, her voice slightly trembling. She had always been more skeptical than the others, often rolling her eyes at the tales spun by townsfolk.

“C’mon, Maha! It’s just an old house. What’s the worst that could happen?” Adhiran said, grinning. He loved a good thrill and was convinced they would uncover some truth about the legend.

“Yeah, let’s just get this over with,” Jai added, though the nervous energy coursing through him contradicted his words. He was excited, yet a part of him feared what awaited them inside.

Armed with flashlights and a backpack filled with snacks, they approached the house. Its weathered façade loomed before them, the windows like dark eyes watching their every move. The front door creaked ominously as they pushed it open, revealing a dust-laden entryway.

The Encounter

Inside, the air was thick with dust and the scent of decay. The wooden floorboards groaned beneath their weight as they ventured deeper into the house. The walls were lined with peeling wallpaper, and faded photographs of long-forgotten faces stared down at them from every corner.

“Let’s split up and look for clues,” Adhiran suggested, his eyes gleaming with excitement.

“Are you insane? We should stick together,” Maha protested, crossing her arms defiantly.

“Fine, we’ll stay close,” Jai intervened, trying to ease the tension. “How about we check the main living room first?”

They moved cautiously toward the room, where the shadows seemed to dance on the walls. As they entered, a sudden chill enveloped them, and the temperature dropped noticeably. Their breath turned visible, mingling with the dust motes in the air.

“I think I heard something,” Maha whispered, her voice barely above a breath. The hair on the back of her neck stood on end.

“It’s probably just the wind,” Adhiran replied, though he too felt the prickling sense of unease. They huddled together, scanning the room.

Suddenly, a loud crash echoed from the upstairs, followed by a soft, mournful wail that sent shivers down their spines. The sound was unmistakably female.

“Did you hear that?” Jai asked, his heart racing.

“Let’s check it out,” Adhiran suggested, his curiosity outweighing his fear.

The Search

With their hearts pounding, the trio ascended the staircase, each step creaking underfoot. The hallway above was dark, and their flashlights flickered ominously. They moved cautiously, peering into each room, finding only remnants of a life long gone: faded curtains, shattered glass, and furniture covered in sheets.

As they reached the end of the hallway, they saw a door slightly ajar. A cold breeze swept through, carrying the faint scent of roses—a smell that seemed out of place in the dilapidated house. Jai pushed the door open, revealing a bedroom that looked untouched by time.

In the center of the room stood a full-length mirror, its surface clouded with age. They approached it, mesmerized. As they peered into the glass, the reflection revealed not just their own faces, but something else—a shadowy figure behind them.

“Turn around!” Maha gasped, but when they did, there was nothing there. Just silence.

“Let’s get out of here,” Jai urged, his bravado fading fast.

But before they could leave, the door slammed shut with a deafening bang. The room plunged into darkness as their flashlights flickered and died. Panic set in, and they scrambled to find the door, but it wouldn’t budge.

The Revelation

“Why isn’t it opening?” Adhiran shouted, pounding on the door.

Maha, trembling, felt a sudden wave of warmth wash over her. “What if… what if she wants to tell us something?”

“What are you talking about?” Jai cried, fear overtaking him.

“Maybe she’s trapped here too,” Maha said, her voice steadying as she spoke. “We need to listen.”

In that moment of stillness, they heard it again—the soft wail, now clearer, filled with longing and sadness.

“Please… help me,” the voice echoed around them. “Find my ring. Free me.”

Suddenly, the lights flickered back on, illuminating the room. In the mirror’s reflection, they saw the ghostly figure of a woman in a tattered wedding dress, her face a mixture of sorrow and hope.

“Your ring?” Jai asked, his voice barely a whisper.

“Lost… in the garden… find it!” With that, the ghostly image faded, leaving them breathless and trembling.

The Conclusion

Without hesitation, the door creaked open, and they rushed down the stairs, fueled by adrenaline. Outside, the moon shone brightly, illuminating the overgrown garden. They searched frantically among the tangled weeds and wilted flowers until Jai spotted a glimmer beneath a gnarled tree.

“There!” he exclaimed, digging into the earth. His fingers brushed against something cold and metallic. As he pulled it free, he revealed a beautiful silver ring, encrusted with delicate jewels.

Holding it aloft, they felt a rush of energy, and the air around them began to shimmer.

“Let’s return it,” Maha urged, her heart racing.

As they stepped back inside, a warm breeze enveloped them, and the atmosphere shifted. They placed the ring on the dusty table in the living room, and in that instant, a radiant light filled the room, revealing Eliza’s spirit once more.

“Thank you,” she whispered, her face now serene. “I can finally rest.”

With that, she vanished, leaving behind a gentle warmth that filled their hearts with peace. The house, once dark and foreboding, now seemed lighter, as if a weight had been lifted.

Exiting the house, Jai, Maha, and Adhiran felt a bond stronger than ever, united by the night’s haunting experience. They had faced their fears and uncovered the truth of Old Ravenwood House, leaving behind not just a legend, but a story of courage and friendship.

Children's FictionHorrorMagical Realism

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Mahalakshmi

"My name is Mahalakshmi, and I'm passionate about storytelling in all its forms. From fiction to real-life tales, I love writing all types of stories that inspire, entertain, and spark imagination. Join me on this creative journey!"

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  • zulfi buxabout a year ago

    Wow what an amazing story Well written

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