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Ashes Beneath Hollowspire - Part 4

The Choir That Burns

By Richard BaileyPublished 6 months ago 4 min read

The air beyond the gate was thick, not with dust, but with memory. It pressed against them in invisible waves, each step drawing deeper into a space where time folded and meaning unraveled. The corridor curved downward into the earth, its stone walls alive with ever-shifting glyphs. Elira watched them shift as she passed, each sigil reacting to her presence, some flaring briefly, others dimming like ancient spirits holding their breath, whispering old songs in a language of light.

“This place isn't just remembering,” she murmured. “It’s listening.”

Vaelin moved ahead, blade drawn and senses sharpened to a razor edge. Every instinct screamed that they were being watched, not by eyes, but by awareness itself. The Remnant still clung to this place, not with power, but with curiosity, a cold, spectral curiosity that scraped at his senses like wind through hollow bones.

Tovik trailed close, the DuMonte crest on his belt glowing faintly now, reacting in pulses that matched the rhythmic beat deep beneath the stone. The farther they moved, the more he felt it, threads of thought whispering around him, coaxing him to believe, to accept the role this place had written for him in dust and flame.

The passage opened into a circular hall, impossibly wide and echoing with a sound that seemed to come from the stone itself. Its ceiling vaulted high above, shaped like a blooming flame wrought in obsidian and inlaid with glimmering copper veins. At its center floated a vast sigil-wheel of molten glyphs, slowly spinning in the air above a cracked stone dais. The symbols within it pulsed and shimmered like a sun in eclipse, beautiful, chaotic, and utterly alien.

Surrounding the chamber were choir pits, seven alcoves carved directly into the wall, arranged like sentinels of silence. Each pit was littered with scorched remnants: charred robes, shattered harmonic instruments, broken conductor’s batons. The stone beneath each was scorched in symmetrical spiral patterns, as though flame had been drawn outward from a single singer’s core.

“A ritual chamber,” Elira said, voice reverent with awe and dread. “Choral spellcasting. These sigils... they were built for synchronized casting. Song-magic amplified by group resonance. But this... this is something else. Something preserved.”

Tovik stepped closer to one of the pits. As his boot touched the edge, a faint echo rang out, his own voice, stretched and warped, singing a name in a language he didn’t know but somehow understood.

Elira looked to Vaelin, her expression suddenly wary, jaw set. “This place knows him. It’s adapting. Resonating with his presence.”

Before Vaelin could speak, the floating sigil-wheel trembled, sending a ripple of light through the floor. The air thickened, turned electric, as if struck by unseen lightning. Then from the walls emerged figures, robed silhouettes cloaked in flame and ash, drifting like smoke given purpose.

Not ghosts. Not constructs. Something between.

They hovered in silence, radiating heatless fire. Then came the sound, a low hum that built into a discordant chant. It was no language, but emotion given vibration: longing, regret, and fury twisted into piercing harmony.

Vaelin stepped forward, his voice low and calm. “Defensive formation. Now.”

The shapes surged. Their hands glowed with the raw energy of remembered magic, casting spiraling bolts of burning sound and sigil-light. Elira’s fingertips flared with phoenixfire as she drew wide, arcing lines in the air, her sigils cracking like music notes torn from the void. She launched searing arcs of fire that collided midair with echo-shields spun from ash and grief.

Tovik drew his blade and a grin. “Guess we’re dancing now.”

Chaos erupted like a symphony set loose. The constructs moved with the spinning of the sigil-wheel, each motion measured and musical, their attacks falling on beats only they could hear. Elira adapted instantly, syncing her magic to their tempo. Her Spellwaltz became a duel of rhythm, her spells rising and falling like choruses in a burning opera.

Vaelin danced into the fray, blade striking like punctuation between measures. He moved with effortless grace, Waltz Reflex in perfect harmony with the rhythmic warzone. He ducked beneath bursts of sonic flame, parried burning blades, and spun through cascading sigils like a silent metronome. Each move matched Elira’s pulse, their motion bound by emotion and memory.

Tovik was the discord in their harmony, the wild card. He weaved through battle with improvisational brilliance, his cloak flaring behind him like a stage curtain. He stomped, whistled, and clapped out-of-sync rhythms that shattered pattern-magic midcast. One thrown dagger struck a construct square in the chest, its blade ringing with the clarity of a perfect note. The echo shattered.

At the center, the sigil-wheel pulsed like a living organ. Elira stepped onto the dais, fire and sorrow in her gaze, and sang. Not with words, but with tone, a spell-tone woven from grief, defiance, and unquenchable purpose. Her phoenixblood flared, casting golden light from her skin.

The glyphs spun faster, burning brighter, and then—

A shockwave burst outward, a ring of purging fire sweeping through the hall. Every construct paused. Then, in a silent, synchronized motion, they knelt. One by one, their forms unraveled into ash and drifted back into the stone walls, as though returning to sleep.

Elira wavered, and Vaelin caught her, grounding her with steady hands and softer eyes.

“It’s not just a temple,” she whispered, breath hitching. “It’s a choir-box. A repository of magical memory, waiting to be sung awake. This place doesn’t cast spells, it remembers them.”

Tovik stepped up to the dais, face unusually somber. The DuMonte crest etched into the center tile flared under his feet. A panel slid open in the floor with a hiss of displaced air, revealing a shallow cradle lined with blackened velvet.

Inside lay a mask, crafted from obsidian glass and etched in delicate gold. It bore the DuMonte crest.

And Tovik’s face.

He swallowed. “Looks like we found the soloist.”

Vaelin said nothing. He only turned his gaze downward.

Far below, beneath the stone and memory, something stirred.

And the sigil-wheel began to spin again.

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About the Creator

Richard Bailey

I am currently working on expanding my writing topics and exploring different areas and topics of writing. I have a personal history with a very severe form of treatment-resistant major depressive disorder.

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