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Ashes Beneath Hollowspire - Part 3

The Temple Beneath

By Richard BaileyPublished 6 months ago 5 min read

The descent began at dusk, when the last light touched the horizon like a burnt wick. The mine entrance gaped like an ancient mouth, framed by rusted rails and reinforced with skeletal supports etched in a hybrid of old sigils and modern stabilizing glyphs. The surrounding earth seemed to lean inward, as if trying to reclaim the wound. The stone glimmered faintly, not with ore, but with veins of dormant light, pulsing softly to the rhythm Elira now recognized: not natural tremor, but echo-song. A buried harmony that tugged at magic, memory, and marrow alike.

Vaelin walked first, his sword sheathed but his stance alert, his boots silent against the grit-strewn floor. Every step echoed like a note in some forgotten ritual. The closer they drew to the shaft, the more he felt it, an invisible pull, like the mine remembered him. Not him precisely, but a shadow of who he might have been.

Elira followed close behind, her fingers constantly moving, drawing sigils in the air that shimmered and warped as if the very atmosphere rejected stability. Her breath hitched with each pulse beneath the earth, matching tempo with something alive. Not slumbering, but dreaming, waiting to wake.

Tovik brought up the rear, torch in one hand, short blade at his belt. His boots kicked up dust that swirled unnaturally, coiling as though unwilling to settle. “Tell me again why all cursed ruins come with stairs, dust, and existential dread?”

“No one curses gardens, Tovi,” Elira muttered, her voice dry. “Too soft.”

They passed through the upper tunnel, wide and warped, supported by decaying timber beams blackened with age. Strange glyphs had been scorched into the wood long ago, wards, protective charms, many of them cracked or fading. A mechanism waited near a sealed shaft, gears locked by a sigil pattern glowing faintly. Elira pressed a palm to the glyphwork, eyes narrowing as it pulsed to life.

With a groan of metal and ancient will, the platform creaked and began its descent. Chains rattled above them like skeletal song.

The world sank.

Cold, stale air swept past them, laced with the scent of coal, copper, and something deeper, like scorched parchment sealed behind stone, and incense that had long lost its purpose. The walls of the shaft blurred with movement, shapes carved just beneath the surface. Faces? Patterns? Or only tricks of shadow and magic?

After several minutes, the platform shuddered to a halt before a massive chamber carved directly into the bedrock. Pillars of basalt rose like broken teeth around the perimeter. The stone glistened with moisture, and something else. Symbols traced across every wall: curving, spiraling, rhythmic. They glowed faintly in hues of copper and ash-blue, pulsing in time with the echo-song. It was not illumination, it was a heartbeat.

Massive statues lined the chamber edges, towering robed figures with blank faces, hands raised in mirrored gestures. Not welcoming. Not warning. Witnessing.

“The temple,” Elira whispered. Her voice was reverent, uncertain. “It’s not built. It’s remembered. These sigils… they’re memory-locked. Not cast, they are the stone.”

Vaelin stepped closer to one of the statues. Its face was perfectly smooth, but faint indentations hinted at detail that had once been carved there. Worn away not by erosion, but by deliberate intent. “Someone didn’t just try to hide this place. They tried to erase it.”

Tovik crouched beside a long-cold brazier. The moment his fingers brushed the edge, blue flame burst into life. A ripple of motion followed—braziers along the chamber’s edge lit one by one in cascading order. The light revealed inscriptions that had been hidden in the dark, etched into every surface, even the statues’ robes. It was music in stone.

The echo-song changed, stronger, deeper. Slower. But no longer alone.

There were voices in it.

Elira turned sharply. “It’s not just memory. It’s a choir. A magical resonance field, bound to identity. It remembers through names. Blood. Legacy.”

At the center of the floor, a great mosaic had been carved directly into the stone. Fire sigils wove in and out of one another, interlocked with glyphs of tempo, repetition, and magical rhythm. At its heart lay a crest, weathered by time but still visible. The DuMonte seal.

And beneath it, a stair spiraled deeper, framed by flickering wards.

Vaelin stood at the edge, eyes narrowed. “Tovik. This is your legacy. Whether it’s real or not, the magic believes it is.”

Tovik stared down at the crest, then up at the blank statues as if seeking judgment. His usual bravado had faded, replaced with a weight that bent his shoulders. “Then let’s meet whatever wrote this chapter.”

They descended again into stone that no longer felt dead. It throbbed with awareness, with memory. The very walls shifted slightly as they walked, arched tighter, elongated, then relaxed. They were in a place that breathed thought.

The sanctum below was dimmer, the air thicker. Runes burned fitfully as they passed. Whispers skittered along the edges of consciousness, not voices, but impressions. Grief. Glory. Sacrifice. Lies.

At the far end of a narrow corridor stood a stone arch, covered in looping sigils. As they approached, the glyphs began to flicker, not in warning, but as if scanning them.

Vaelin’s hand rested on his blade hilt. “Be ready.”

A figure emerged from the archway, a humanoid construct nearly eight feet tall. Its body was obsidian, laced with glowing veins of molten gold. Its eyes were twin pinpricks of fire, flickering with restrained hunger. It moved like memory clothed in ritual.

It did not attack.

It bowed.

“Tovik DuMonte,” it said. Its voice was layered with echoes, like a chorus speaking in perfect unison. “You have returned to the Hollowspire Pact. Will you complete the rite?”

Tovik stared, heart pounding. “...What happens if I say yes?”

“The temple will awaken,” the construct replied. “And so will its promises.”

Elira stepped forward, her voice sharp with tension. “And if he refuses?”

The construct tilted its head in a motion far too human. “Then it forgets you. Forever.”

The air was thick with dust, silence, and unspoken legacy.

Vaelin’s voice broke through it like tempered steel. “We choose what defines us. Not old ghosts.”

Tovik looked to Elira. To Vaelin. Then down at the mosaic beneath his feet.

“I didn’t write this story,” he said. “But I’m not walking away until I’ve read the last word.”

The construct moved aside. The stone gate creaked open, parting with a sound like ancient lungs drawing breath.

And Hollowspire exhaled fire and memory into the dark beyond.

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About the Creator

Richard Bailey

I am currently working on expanding my writing topics and exploring different areas and topics of writing. I have a personal history with a very severe form of treatment-resistant major depressive disorder.

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