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The Whispering Shadows

"Some doors are meant to stay closed... but curiosity always finds a way to open them."

By Archisman BanikPublished about a year ago 4 min read
The Whispering Shadows
Photo by Erik Müller on Unsplash

An ancient Victorian house stood alone at the end of a deserted dirt road, shrouded in vines and secrets. The townsfolk avoided it for years, telling stories of ghostly apparitions and sinister whispers. For Lisa and her brother Mark, however, it was a perfect challenge. Curiosity and a promise to stream the daring adventure online drew them to spend the night there.

As the sun dipped down into the horizon, they approached the house. Its silhouette loomed high against the crimson sky and was somehow magnificent and menacing simultaneously. The wooden gate shook open as it seemed to welcome them inside. Armed with only flashlights and their phones for light, the pair crossed the threshold into darkness.

Inside, the dust hung thick in the air, and silence reigned until it was interrupted by the old floorboards creaking beneath them. The foyer was grand, complete with a sweeping staircase and a chandelier that had hung precariously in one corner. Paintings of serious faces lined the walls, eyes seeming to follow the two down.

"That is creepy," Mark whispered, his voice barely able to contain his discomfort.

Lisa smirked, holding up her phone to take that shot. "It's just an old house. Let's go explore," she said.

They crept up, their footsteps echoing through the room. The dining room was locked into time, the ornate table set, ready for some ghostly dinner party. In the parlor, cracked reflections stared back at them from a mirror.

As they entered the kitchen, it seemed like the air was growing colder. Lisa shivered. "Did you feel that?"

Mark nodded, pointing at frost gathering on the windowpane. "Why's it so cold here?

But before she could say anything, a loud thump came from upstairs. She froze, staring at him.

"It's probably just the wind," Lisa managed to suggest, though her voice shook.

Mark wasn't convinced, but he followed her as they climbed up to the creaking staircase. The hallway above was lined with doors, each slightly ajar. A faint, rhythmic tapping echoed, though its source was unclear.

Lisa opened the first door and found a bedroom. The bed was a mess, as if it hadn't been made in days. The wallpaper peeled like dead skin. On the nightstand was an old, dusty journal. She flipped it open, the paper crackling with the motion, revealing hurried, scrawled entries:

"They're here. They whisper my name at night. The shadows move even when there's no light. I must leave before it's too late."

Mark read over her shoulder, his voice barely a whisper. “What happened to them?”

Before Lisa could answer, a low, guttural moan reverberated through the house. The journal fell from her hands.

“Okay, I’m done,” Mark said, backing toward the door.

But as they turned, the hallway was no longer empty. A shadowy figure stood at the far end, its form wavering like smoke.

“Who’s there?” Lisa called, though fear gripped her throat.

The figure made no response. Instead, it began to slide toward them, moving with an unnatural smoothness.

"Run!" Mark yelled, yanking at Lisa's arm.

They ran down the hall, diving into another room and flinging themselves inside. Lisa slams the door shut and presses her back against it.

"What was that?" she gasps.

Mark didn't say anything. His eyes were wide and fixed on the wardrobe across the room. Slowly, creaking open its doors revealed a pair of glowing, yellow eyes.

Before they could even react, the shadow from the hallway had seeped under the door, reforming into its humanoid shape. The room turned icy, their breath visible as the entity closed in.

"Why are you here?" it hissed, its voice a thousand whispers layered together.

Lisa clutched her phone, fumbling to turn on the flashlight. "Stay back!"

The illumination from the light seemed to agitate the entity, making it stumble. But it wasn't enough. The shadows around the room thickened, coiling up like snakes, extending toward the siblings.

"We have to get out!" Mark yelled.

They ran past the thing and out down the stairs. The house became animate as doors slammed shut, walls strained to confine them, and the chandelier above flailed and let go crystals that rained down.

Lisa finally got them to the front door. She yanked it open and they went tumbling out into night.

As they ran down the dirt road, the house loomed behind them, its windows glowing faintly like malevolent eyes. The whispers followed them, fading only when they reached the safety of their car.

Breathless, they sat in silence, staring at the dark outline of the house in the rearview mirror.

“We’re never doing anything like that again,” Mark said, his voice shaking.

Lisa nodded, clutching the journal she had unknowingly brought with her. On its cover, new words had appeared, scrawled in blood-red ink:

"You can leave, but you’ll never escape."

The siblings exchanged a terrified glance, the house’s sinister laughter echoing in their minds as they sped away.

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About the Creator

Archisman Banik

A storyteller and seeker of life’s treasures, I share inspiring tales, life hacks, and everyday magic. I explore simple moments, celebrating resilience and creativity. When not writing, I’m diving into books, or enjoying nature’s beauty.

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