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The Visitor on Highway 17

A Silent Passenger from the Stars

By Muhammad SaeedPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

Mia Torres had driven long-haul routes across the American Southwest for nearly eight years. Desert nights were usually her favorite—peaceful, open, and star-filled. But nothing about that night on Highway 17 felt peaceful.

She was hauling a load of aluminum piping from Phoenix to Reno. It was past midnight when the radio began to crackle with static, then silence. The sky, once dark and moonlit, turned an eerie shade of green. At first, she thought it was some kind of electrical malfunction, maybe a lightning storm forming. But there were no clouds. No wind.

Just that glowing sky.

She slowed the truck and squinted ahead. There, on the shoulder of the road, stood a figure—tall, motionless, and unlike anything she had ever seen. It was thin, elongated, with limbs slightly too long to be human. Its skin was pale gray, nearly translucent under the green sky. Its eyes glowed like dim headlights.

Mia froze. Every instinct told her to drive past. But something—curiosity, fear, or a strange kind of calm—compelled her to stop.

The figure walked forward in slow, deliberate steps and climbed into the passenger seat without a sound. No door opened. No voice greeted her.

It just sat there.

Mia’s hands gripped the steering wheel so tightly her knuckles turned white. The air inside the cab felt dense, like the pressure had shifted.

“Do… you need help?” she asked, her voice barely audible.

The figure didn’t respond. It simply lifted one long finger and pointed straight ahead.

Mia swallowed hard, put the truck in gear, and drove.

The next ten minutes passed in total silence. Her heart pounded in her ears. The green hue outside the windshield bathed the world in an unnatural glow. The desert looked alien, empty, and endless.

She couldn’t look directly at the figure, but she felt its presence—unblinking, unmoving, but somehow aware.

Then, just as suddenly as it had appeared, the figure was gone. No sound. No door opening. It was as if it had never been there.

The radio crackled to life again, playing an old country tune. The sky returned to its normal deep black, the stars twinkling quietly overhead.

Mia pulled over to the side of the road, her hands shaking. She opened the passenger door, half expecting the thing to still be sitting there, invisible to her eyes.

Nothing.

She stepped out and took several deep breaths of cold desert air. Maybe she’d fallen asleep at the wheel. Maybe it was a dream, a hallucination. But as she climbed back into the cab, she noticed something on the passenger seat.

A small silver coin.

It was cool to the touch and far heavier than it looked. It was unlike any currency she’d ever seen—etched with strange geometric symbols and patterns that shimmered slightly when the coin caught the light. In the center was a triangle within a circle, surrounded by characters she couldn’t recognize.

She kept the coin.

Weeks passed, and Mia couldn’t stop thinking about that night. She didn’t tell anyone—not her dispatcher, not her friends. Who would believe her?

But odd things started happening.

Every time she drove near Highway 17, her radio cut out at the exact same mile marker. Her GPS would stutter and reset, flashing odd coordinates that led nowhere. Other truckers on the same route started reporting strange lights in the sky, missing time, or unexplained dreams.

Mia began researching. The coin’s symbols didn’t match any known language. Cryptographers, amateur UFO hunters, and even a retired linguistics professor couldn’t identify them. But one man—a fringe researcher in Roswell—said the triangle within the circle was similar to ancient star maps found in a cave in South America.

He asked if she could part with the coin.

She declined.

One year later, Mia still drives Highway 17, though now with a dash cam and a strange sense of expectation. The coin never leaves her dashboard. Sometimes it glows faintly in the dark, like it remembers.

She hasn’t seen the visitor again—but occasionally, when the night is quiet and the sky seems just a little too green, she finds herself glancing toward the passenger seat.

Wondering.

Waiting.

And somewhere, deep in the static between the stations, she swears she hears a voice whispering her name.

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  • Sidra khan 6 months ago

    It's amazing story

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