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The Daughter's Desolation

The Daughter's Desolation

By ANNA CORALPublished 2 years ago 3 min read

The unforgiving sun beat down on Eva's back as she trudged across the cracked earth. Her once vibrant green eyes, now dull with exhaustion, scanned the horizon for any sign of life. The once fertile fields of her village lay barren, ravaged by a relentless drought. Hunger gnawed at her stomach, a constant companion for weeks.

Eva was only twelve, yet the weight of responsibility sat heavy on her small shoulders. Her father, a renowned sculptor, had succumbed to the drought's cruel grip months ago. Her mother, weakened by grief and illness, lay bedridden in their mud-brick hut. Survival now rested on Eva's thin shoulders.

The elders spoke of a hidden oasis, a place untouched by the drought, nestled deep within the Whispering Sands. Legends whispered of its lush greenery and life-giving waters, a beacon of hope in this desolate world. With a flicker of determination in her eyes, Eva decided to find it.

Days bled into weeks as Eva traversed the unforgiving landscape. Her once bright dress hung limply on her skeletal frame. Mirages shimmered in the distance, taunting her with images of shimmering water that always dissipated upon reaching them. Each sunrise brought renewed hope, each sunset another crushing disappointment.

One evening, as the last vestiges of sunlight bled from the sky, Eva stumbled upon a cluster of weathered stones. Etched on one was a single word – "Oasis." A surge of desperate hope revitalized her. This was it, the gateway to salvation.

Following a barely discernible path marked by the stones, Eva ventured deeper into the desert. The air grew thick and stale, the wind moaning a mournful song through the skeletal remains of ancient trees. As darkness descended, Eva stumbled upon a towering stone archway, its surface worn smooth by time. This was the entrance, the threshold to life.

But as she stepped through the arch, a chilling realization dawned on her. The "oasis" was a graveyard. Lush greenery, once vibrant, lay withered and brown. A skeletal hand protruded from beneath the cracked earth, a grim reminder of those who had come before her, lured by the same deceitful legend.

Despair washed over Eva, a cold, suffocating wave. She had failed. Her mother, weakened and alone, would surely perish. Tears welled up in her eyes, blurring the desolate landscape. As she sank to her knees, a glint of metal caught her eye.

Half-buried in the sand lay a silver locket, its surface etched with intricate swirls. Inside, a faded photograph depicted a woman with familiar green eyes, holding a smiling baby – Eva. A wave of love and a flicker of defiance washed over her. Her mother needed her, and she wouldn't give up.

With newfound strength, Eva picked herself up. The oasis may have been a cruel mirage, but she wouldn't let it be her fate. She would return to her mother, not as a savior, but as a daughter who wouldn't give up. The journey back was arduous, fueled by a desperate love and a refusal to succumb to despair.

When Eva finally reached her village, she found her mother gone. The hut was empty, a chilling silence hanging heavy in the air. Villagers whispered of a caravan that had passed, taking the sick and dying in search of a better life. Hope, like a fragile butterfly, fluttered away.

Eva didn't find her mother, nor did she find the fabled oasis. But in the face of tragedy, she found a strength she never knew she possessed. The harsh desert had carved away her innocence, but it had also forged a resilience that would carry her forward, a testament to the unwavering love between a mother and daughter.

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ANNA CORAL

I am a writer at vocal.

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