Sun Killer
A Fate of Fire Short Story - Under a Spell Challenge

“Elements of the earth, elements of the sky, please bring us your protective eye. Powers of feather and scale, I summon you. I call upon you to protect me. So it may be.”
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Amanda Starks
Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
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Become a paid subscriber to get access.awesome-I love the how well the Characters are written, nice job
Wow, Amanda, this was so good! To echo Celia, I loved the interactions, they felt so natural, like a group of long time friends or family. And your descriptions were so vivid and wonderful, it was like I was with them. There's a lot of tenderness in this story too, something missing from many of the other coven stories I've read. Great work!
Fantastic -I love the interactions between them, so, so well written, you 'do' dialogue sp perfectly 🤍
Wow, fantastic story hard to stop reading and you gave a lot of details in this story like I was right there in with the character's. Amazing!!
This was INCREDIBLE! I loved every minute of it and the detail is unmatched oh my goodness! your talent is so unique <3
This one is absolutely AMAZING! Better than when you had me look it over. Wonderful job!
This was fantastic! Enjoyed it all the way through. The banter is believable and the pacing is good. Excellent descriptions of the witches and other more vivid elements. You're a talented fantasy writer and I hope you keep at it. Very well done. I hope this places in the challenge and other take the time to read it. It's worth it.