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The Invisible Storm And Metal Mame.

(A blend of thriller, romance, and mystery. All characters are fictional. Tej’s team are not criminals but real heroes—this mystery will unravel gradually.)

By MD Mehedi Hasan fans of Alam Sir.Published 9 months ago 3 min read

The entire country is in chaos due to the rampage of mysterious "aliens" in the city. Today, a theft occurs here; tomorrow, a robbery or murder happens there. The police are helpless. The culprits aren’t ordinary humans—they possess supernatural abilities. One can cling to walls and vanish in the blink of an eye. Another’s touch electrocutes victims instantly. A third fights like a machine, his body as unyielding as iron. Their leader, Tej, moves like a hurricane—destroying everything in seconds, disappearing before anyone can react. Cameras can’t capture him; people claim he’s like the wind—felt but unseen.

Today, they rob a bank. When employees resist, bodies are left behind. Police find no trace of Tej on cameras—only whispers of his name from his team. To the world, he’s a ghost.

Special Officer Sanzida Rahman Snigdha (called "Sanzu") scoffs at the "alien" theory. Aliens don’t look human. Why would they steal?Her mother interrupts: Nahir called. He wants to take you to the hospital and then on a date.
Tell him I’m busy with a case,"* Sanzu snaps. I only agreed to marry him to shut you up. I don’t even like him.

Her colleague Sani, always the voice of reason, teases: Stop overthinking. Let’s focus on catching this ‘invisible man.’ Release his photo publicly—someone will spot him.
But how does he move so fast? Cameras can’t track him… There’s a secret here, Sani mutters.

As Sanzu circulates Tej’s photo, a call from Nahir buzzes incessantly. Sani prods: Just tell him you’re not interested!
It’s not him… I don’t want to marry anyone. My parents’ failed marriage ruined it for me,
Sanzu admits.

Suddenly, Sani bursts in: Nahir’s father, Dr. Nazrul, treated a patient decades ago—a boy named Adil who could see through walls! After treatment, Adil vanished, and Dr. Nazrul fell into a coma. A nurse leaked the story… There’s a connection!

Sanzu’s eyes narrow. Find that nurse. We’re going to Nahir’s hospital—now.


Meanwhile, Tej’s team reacts to their viral photo.
Nahid (electric touch): The police are hunting us! Sanzu’s behind this.
Sara(wall-crawler) glares: Don’t even joke about Tej liking her!
Niloy (iron body) laughs: Relax, Sara! Tej’s just intrigued.

Tej stares at Sanzu’s photo, lost in thought. Nahid jokes: Smitten, boss?
Quiet, Tej growls, static crackling.One more word, and I’ll fry you.

But his mind lingers on Sanzu—the officer daring to challenge his storm.A towering metal human stands before a massive ashram Tejrin Chowdhury Ashram, a sanctuary built with blood, sweat, and shattered dreams. Inside, orphans and abandoned elders find solace. The Metal Men, though forged from steel, breathe life into this refuge. Their leader, Tej, named the ashram after his mute sister, Tejrin, who hasn’t spoken since their childhood trauma.

Rita and Tushar, siblings managing the ashram, rush to greet children clutching chocolates. Elders embrace the Metal Men, their cold exteriors warmed by love.


Rita (hesitant): “Brother Tej… We need money. The doctor’s coming for the elders.”
Tej (gently lifting her chin): “Hold your head high. Never bow to anyone.”

Tushar (bitter): “Why take their money? It’s bloodstained!”
Rita (snaps): “They saved us! These ‘monsters’ rescued orphans dumped in gutters by your kind!”

Niloy (iron-bodied, smirking): “Hypocrite! When did *you* earn a penny honorably? That bank we robbed? It laundered black money. We purified it.”

Nahid (electric touch, voice trembling): “I was abandoned as a baby. Tej’s father raised me. When we starved, society broke our legs for stealing bread. Now, I shock theme it’s poetic justice.”

Silence falls. Tushar stares at the floor, guilt-ridden.


Sara (wall-crawler, teasing Niloy): “Stop flirting, lizard! Rita’s not marrying you.”
Niloy (grinning): “If I win her, I’ll gift you wings, cockroach!”
Sara (mock-threatening): “One touch, and your wedding’s a funeral!”

Tej (interrupting): “Enough! Where’s Nahid?”
Rita (softly): “With Tejrin… again.”


In a dim room, Nahid kneels before Tejrin, who sits frozen in trauma.
Nahid (pleading): “Say *something. I’ll build you chocolate shops, fill skies with flowers… just say you love me.”
Silence. A tear streaks his metallic cheek. Outside, Tej watches, heartbroken.


Meanwhile,Special Officer Sanzida (“Sanzu”) and Sani investigate Dr. Nazrul’s coma.
Farha (Dr. Nazrul’s daughter, annoyed): “Who’s banging the—? Oh. You.”
Sani (smirking): “Missed us, sweetheart?”
Sanzu (grim): “We need answers. Your brother’s at the ashram. Why?”

They enter a sterile room. Dr. Nazrul lies motionless, a shell of the man who once treated a boy who could see through walls.
Sani (whispers): “Something’s wrong here. That ashram’s the key.

”Thank you for reading!

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