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The Awakening of Aeloris

When power is neither light nor dark, only self-awareness can decide its fate.

By Sandra AmiedorPublished 11 months ago 4 min read
A mystical, glowing book surrounded by swirling magical energy

Aeloris had always felt like an outsider. Among the scholars of Eldenreach, where young wizards were trained in the art of magic, he alone questioned the nature of their power. The others focused on control—how to bend fire to their will, how to command the winds, how to shape the elements into tools of dominance. But Aeloris could never silence the unease in his soul.

Magic, he thought, was not just a tool. It was something more. Something alive.

His instructors dismissed his questions. Magic exists to serve those who are worthy, they would say. It has no will of its own. But Aeloris was not convinced. He often found himself wandering the great halls of Eldenreach late into the night, drawn by the whispers in the shadows, the pull of something just beyond the veil of understanding.

One evening, that pull became impossible to ignore.

The Forbidden Archive

Deep beneath the citadel, past halls lined with ancient tapestries and torches that burned with an eerie blue light, lay the Forbidden Archive. No student was allowed to enter; only the High Masters had access. Rumors swirled about the knowledge hidden there—secrets of lost civilizations, spells too dangerous to wield, truths that could unravel the fabric of reality itself.

Aeloris had never dared to approach the Archive before, but that night, something changed.

As he wandered through the lower halls, he felt a presence. A heartbeat in the air, steady and rhythmic, calling to him. His own heartbeat quickened in response. Without thinking, he followed it, his feet moving as if guided by an unseen force.

He stopped before an ancient iron door, its surface covered in runes that pulsed with a dim light. The whispers in his mind grew louder, merging into a single voice, neither welcoming nor threatening—just present.

"Open the door."

His fingers brushed the runes, and the door shuddered open.

Inside, the chamber was unlike anything he had ever seen. The air crackled with energy. Rows of bookshelves stretched into the darkness, filled with tomes bound in leather so old it looked like petrified bark. In the center of the room, on a pedestal of black stone, lay a single book.

It was different from the others. It glowed faintly, its cover adorned with symbols older than any language Aeloris had studied. Unlike the surrounding books, it was not covered in dust. It looked as if it had been waiting.

His breath caught in his throat.

"Touch it," the voice urged.

Aeloris hesitated. Every fiber of his training told him to turn back. But his soul—his very essence—knew that if he walked away now, he would never be whole.

With trembling fingers, he reached out and laid his hand on the book.

The Vision

The world shattered.

A wave of energy surged through him, lifting him off the ground. His vision blurred, then sharpened into something impossibly clear. He was no longer in the Archive. He was somewhere else—somewhere beyond time.

Before him stretched an endless void, filled with swirling galaxies and stars that pulsed like living hearts. And at the center of it all stood a figure.

It was him.

But not just him—versions of him. A thousand Aelorises, each slightly different. Some younger, some older. Some filled with darkness, some glowing with light. And then he saw it—the truth of what had led him here.

The book contained the essence of Origin Magic—the first and purest form of magic, the source from which all others were derived. It was neither good nor evil, neither light nor dark. It simply was. And it had chosen him.

But there was more.

In the depths of the vision, he saw the fate of the world. Cities crumbling into dust. Skies torn asunder by storms of raw energy. Magic spiraling out of control, consuming everything. And at the heart of the destruction, he stood, his eyes burning with the same power that now coursed through his veins.

It was not a warning.

It was a choice.

The Awakening

Aeloris gasped as the vision ended. He was back in the Archive, kneeling on the cold stone floor, the book still beneath his hand. His body trembled, but not with fear. With understanding.

All his life, he had been taught that magic was something to be controlled. But he saw now that this was a lie. Magic was not a force to be wielded—it was a force to be understood. It was consciousness itself, a reflection of the mind that shaped it.

The destruction he had seen was not inevitable. It was what would happen if he followed the path of those before him—if he allowed his fear and desire for control to cloud his awareness.

But he had another choice.

He closed his eyes and breathed deeply. Instead of resisting the power, he let it flow through him. Instead of grasping for control, he surrendered.

The energy within him settled. The whispers quieted. The book’s glow dimmed, as if it, too, was at peace.

When he rose to his feet, he was no longer just a student of Eldenreach.

He was awake.

A New Path

Aeloris did not return to his studies. The halls of Eldenreach felt smaller now, their teachings a fraction of the truth he had glimpsed. The world did not need another wizard who sought power. It needed someone who understood balance.

For too long, magic had been treated as a weapon, as a means of bending reality to one’s will. But true mastery was not about control. It was about harmony. About knowing oneself so deeply that no force—no prophecy, no ancient power—could shake that foundation.

With the book safely tucked beneath his arm, he left Eldenreach behind. There were answers waiting beyond the citadel walls, in the forgotten places of the world.

And he would find them.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    I love stories with magical and whimsical style! Very entertaining!

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