The Art of Editing
Tips for Polishing and Refining Your Manuscript

As authors, we are not only creators but sculptors, molding and shaping our manuscripts until they gleam with brilliance. But how do we refine our words to create a literary masterpiece?
Let us begin with the delicate art of self-editing. Once you’ve poured your heart and soul onto the page and completed your initial draft, it’s time to step back and view your manuscript with fresh eyes. Take a break, go for a walk, or indulge in some delicious tea. Give yourself the gift of distance, for it is here that clarity emerges.
When you return to your manuscript, you will be less close to the writing and able to approach it with a discerning eye. You will spot inconsistencies, tighten your prose, and refine your storytelling. When we write, our brains see what we want the page to say, not what is actually written there. By giving yourself a bit of space from your work, you will be more able to see those mistakes. As you continue to edit, ask yourself tough questions: Is the pacing right? Are the characters fully realized? Are there any plot holes that need mending? By editing, you can transform your rough diamond into a polished gem.
Let us not forget the importance of attention to detail. Look closely at sentence structure. Eliminate unnecessary words or phrases that clutter your prose. Seek clarity in each paragraph, ensuring that your ideas flow from one to the next. But it doesn’t stop there. Scrutinize the consistency of your characters’ traits, the progression of your plot, and how natural your dialog flows. Watch out for pesky grammar errors and odd spelling that can disrupt the reading experience. By devoting yourself to the finer details, you can create a manuscript that shines with professionalism.
You don’t have to walk this editing journey alone. The wisdom of others can be a guiding light. Enter the beta readers. These brave souls will offer their honest feedback on your manuscript. Choose beta readers who are avid readers themselves. Individuals you can trust to provide constructive criticism. Seek a diverse range of readers, each with their own unique perspective, to gather an understanding of how your manuscript resonates. Embrace their feedback with an open mind, but remember, you are the final judge of your work. Consider their suggestions and use them as a springboard for refining your prose.
Another option is to join a literary critique group. By offering to critique another’s book, you gain reviews of your own. Populated with writers like yourself, these fellow authors can give you feedback the beta readers might miss. Their input will zero in on things a beta might notice, but not understand how to describe. Take what these fellow writers say with a grain of salt. If the critique group is all wannabe writers, they will not give you the professional input an experienced editor would. Still, they can be a useful and cost-effective tool if you do not have the budget for a professional editor. Critiques groups meet either in person or on-line. Check out your local writer associations to find them.
Editing your manuscript is a lengthy process. It often takes more time than the writing of your first draft. Most authors do several passes over their books before they feel it is ready. Allow yourself the time to get the job done right. Through distance, attention to detail, and using a second pair of eyes on your prose, you can polish your shiny idea into a story you can be proud of.
About The Author:
Wendy Van Camp is the Poet Laureate for the City of Anaheim, California. Her work is influenced by cutting edge technology, astronomy, and daydreams. She is a nominated finalist for the Elgin Award, a Pushcart Prize, and for a Dwarf Stars Award. Her poems, stories, and articles have appeared in: “Star*Line”, “Scifaikuest”, and “Indy Author Magazine”, among many others. She is the editor of two annual poetry anthologies “Eccentric Orbits” and “Anaheim Poetry Review”, and a guest editor for the SFPA’s “Eye To The Telescope”. She is a graduate of the Ad Astra Speculative Fiction Workshop and a member of SFWA, Codex, SFPA, and IBPA. Find her books on all major online retailers. Learn more at http://wendyvancamp.com
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Wendy Van Camp
Poet Laureate of Anaheim, CA. I'm a speculative poet, scifi author, essayist, and poetry editor. A Pushcart Prize, Elgin Award, and Dwarf Star Nominee. Member of SFWA, SFPA, IBPA.
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