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The Abyss Beckons

the call of the treasure

By davide aveniaPublished about a year ago 4 min read
The Abyss Beckons
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The sun dipped low on the horizon, casting a fiery glow over the endless expanse of the ocean. The Elysian, a once-grand yacht, now worn by time and the elements, cut through the calm waters with a steady hum. On deck, the crew moved with a practiced efficiency, but tension crackled in the air like a brewing storm.

Captain Marlowe, a seasoned sailor with salt-and-pepper hair and a weathered face, stood at the helm. His eyes, sharp and calculating, scanned the horizon. During his life he had sailed these waters for decades, hundreds of times, but this voyage was different. A heavy cargo rested in the hold: a chest that whispered of untold riches. It was the prize of a lifetime, what Marlowe had been searching for, but as all the great hidden and unclaimed treasures, it came with a price.

Below deck, in the dimly lit cabin, a heated argument unfolded. Helena, the navigator, and Marlowe’s most trusted confidante, was pacing back and forth, clearly troubled. Her voice trembled with anger. “You knew what was in that chest, didn’t you? You knew what would have happened if we had claimed it, and you brought it aboard anyway!”

Marlowe entered, his expression grim. “It’s just a chest, Helena, what could be the danger? Gold, jewels, nothing we haven’t seen before.”

“It’s cursed, Marlowe, and even if you’re not admitting it, I know you realized it too!” she hissed, her green eyes flashing. “Ever since we found it, the crew’s been uneasy. Strange things have been happening: compasses spinning out of control, sudden fogs coming out of nowhere, and now... the whispers. We will go crazy if this story continues!”

Marlowe hardened. “We’ve come too far to turn back now. We’re close to the island. We’ll hide it there, and once we leave it, we’ll be rid of this burden.”

Helena shook her head, stepping closer to him. “It’s not just about the treasure, Marlowe. It’s about what we’ve unleashed. I’ve seen things, heard things... things that aren’t natural.”

A sudden lurch threw them both against the walls as the Elysian shuddered violently. A chill wind swept through the cabin, extinguishing the lanterns and plunging the room into darkness. The whispers grew louder, filling the space with an eerie, unintelligible chant.

Marlowe steadied himself, reaching for the pistol tucked into his belt. “We need to get back on deck!” he ordered, his voice betraying none of the fear gripping his heart.

The two of them scrambled up the stairs and burst onto the deck, where the scene was one of complete chaos. The crew, normally disciplined and fearless, was in disarray, their faces pale with terror. The sea around them had turned deep black, inky waves churning with unnatural force.

“What’s happening?” Helena shouted over the roar of the ocean.

Marlowe didn’t answer. His eyes were fixed on the chest, now sitting ominously in the middle of the deck, its lid slightly ajar. Tendrils of dark mist curled out from it, slowly creeping toward the crew. One of the men screamed as the mist touched him, his body convulsing before he collapsed on the floor, and slipped in the dark sea, lifeless.

“We have to throw it overboard!” Helena screamed, grabbing Marlowe’s arm.

Marlowe hesitated, torn between the wealth that could set him up for life and the creeping horror that had invaded his ship and was before his eyes. The mist was growing, spreading across all the deck, and he knew there was no other choice.

“Help me!” he shouted, rushing toward the chest. Together, they struggled but managed to lift it, as the unnatural cold was seeping into their bones. The whispers were deafening now, urging them to stop, to open the chest, to give in to the darkness.

With a final heave, they hurled the chest over the side. It hit the water with a splash, and for a moment, everything was still, and the screaming ceased as the crew calmed. The whispers stopped, and the mist began to dissipate.

But as they breathed a sigh of relief, the ship lurched again, this last time more violently. The deck tilted sharply, and before she could react, Helena lost her footing. Marlowe reached out to grab her, but their hands barely brushed before she slipped over the edge, her scream swallowed by the roar of the ocean.

Marlowe rushed to the side, but all he saw was the dark, churning water where Helena had fallen. He called out her name, but there was no response; only the relentless waves that seemed to mock him.

The Elysian slowly righted itself, the ocean calming as if nothing had happened. The cursed chest was gone, but so was Helena, the only person who had ever truly understood him.

As the first light of dawn broke over the horizon, Marlowe stood alone at the helm, his hands gripping the wheel with white-knuckled intensity. The treasure was gone, and so was the woman who had tried to save them all. The ocean stretched endlessly before him, who had regained his usual composure, cold and indifferent, as he sailed into the unknown.

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