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Sinking Ships

The Sea Of Broken Souls

By Rebekah BTPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - September 2023

Every drunken kiss gets abducted by the abyss of misconceived thoughts that fool us into believing we have a genuine connection.

In reality, we are solely feeding off each other's despair and disparity while pointing fingers elsewhere, too petrified to admit that all we experience in this life we subconsciously create ourselves.

We cling to any source that brings us temporary happiness until we realize it's all an illusion, then we get bored and relocate our attention to something new and temporary.

We are all too broken to truly trust and believe in one another, so we fall in lust instead of love and when shit gets too "real", we sink the ship and swim on to the next.

A vicious storm of broken hearts shattering as the missing pieces sink to the bottom of the sea never to be found again, leaving all of the wounds exposed with no chance of healing.

We are a lost generation, brainwashed by this false sense of reality for which we have destroyed ourselves to abide by, all whilst losing the real meaning of living a genuine and fulfilled life.

We Are Pirates of The Sea of Broken Souls.

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About the Creator

Rebekah BT

Wanderer of words, striving to embellish my vocabulary.

I find beauty in sadness and convey them into writing.

Bringing awareness to addictions, mental health and the struggles of life.

Author of Book "Behind Skye's Eyes"

www.rebekahbt.com

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin10 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story! Amazing work and well deserved. 🎉🎈 Super proud of you!!!

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    😞

  • Tina D'Angelo2 years ago

    Good Lord, you have nailed it right on the head. Easy conquest leads to easy losses. Brillliant!

  • Naveedkk 2 years ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Congratulations on your Top Story🎉😉💯👌💖📝

  • Great poem! And very true! We allow ourselves to get easily brainwashed!

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    So much truth here. Great job and congratulations!

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    You hit the proverbial nail on its head. I know many people like this and they would probably tell you that I fit right in (but I'm really trying not to); I'd rather be me but that isn't easy, now, is it?

  • Elamine2 years ago

    Beautiful story, thanks

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