Paul Stewart's "Unnerve, Unsettle, And Scare Me" Challenge
Unofficial Fiction Challenge
I've been wanting to run my own little unofficial challenge for a long time now, following in the footsteps of so many of you that have run your own. Now, I've finally put together something that I believe will be a lot of fun.
Especially given the time of year.
So what's the challenge?
Basically, unnerve me, unsettle me and generally scare me. I want you to leave me feeling more than a little shook up. Make me want to look over my back constantly after reading your words. Make me afraid of turning off the light switch, walking down that alley, walking through the woods during the day or at night, or an empty car park.
When writing anything, I am interested in telling an engaging and compelling story, of course, but I also want to reach through the screen and into the reader's heart and mind. I love making people laugh, making people think and ponder, making people feel deep emotions, and at the moment, perhaps even more than anything else, I love scaring people. Scaring is one thing though...but I really get a kick out of trying to unnerve and unsettle people.
That's what this challenge is all about.
I want you to do your best to make me rethink going to sleep ever again.
Some Tips and Suggestions
What is scary is subjective. I understand that, so as a little help, seeing as I will be the judge, here are some suggestions that may help you in putting together your story:
- I don't usually find aliens, ghosts, haunted houses and monsters scary (I am prepared to be proven wrong though. There are many, many fantastic writers on this platform, so I know plenty of you will be able to surprise me)
- Even if you are trying to confuse and trick me, the story should still make sense or I'll lose interest quickly.
- I love a good twist - especially one I don't see coming. If I see it coming, though, but it's still a clever and deeply unsettling twist, I'll still love it.
Important - Challenge Rules And Information
I feel very headmasterish writing rules and important information for an unofficial challenge, but this is my cross to bear.
- I am not expecting a massive piece, because let's face it, we're all busy and I want people to take part and have fun with it. So the word count should be between 500 and 800 words.
- You must include an embedded link to this post with the words "This is for Paul Stewart's Unnerve, Unsettle, and Scare Me Challenge" at the start of your piece. Here is the link - https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/paul-stewart-s-unnerve-unsettle-and-scare-me-challenge.%3C/li%3E%3Cli class="css-2hn7oe-Li e12bsgp32"> You must also include "For Paul Stewart's Unnerve, Unsettle, and Scare Me Challenge" in the subtitle of your piece.
- You must post the link to your entry in the comments section of this piece. I will add all entries to this post as they are submitted.
- You must publish it to the Fiction community.
- There will be one winner, who will win $10 in the form of a tip, and, two runner's up, who will win $5 each in the form of a tip.
- Strictly one entry per person.
- The deadline is Friday, 10th November. I will announce the winners on Monday, 13th November.
- Have fun!
Now I can stop feeling like a teacher or manager. I look forward to seeing what you all come up with. Be sure to spread news of this challenge far and wide (well...among Vocal creators, obviously. I won't see people's entries if they just think them in their head or post them on their fridge.)
Can't wait to see what you come up with!
The Entries
Here are all the entries:
Chef's Special by Kristen Balyeat (Awarded Top Story)
A Good Read by Celia In Underland
Deep underground by Rachel Deeming
Roulette by Hannah Moore (Awarded Top Story)
Fragments by Rick Henry Christopher (Awarded Top Story)
Once upon a Halloween by Novel Allen
The Giveaway by Dana Crandell (Awarded Top Story)
The Fridge by Lamar Wiggins (Awarded Top Story)
They're Coming by Brin J. (Awarded Top Story)
Long walk home by JBaz
Screen Time by Kendall Defoe
Malevolent Fireflies by Amber Annabelle
Familiar Face by Rebekah Conrad
Thanks for reading!
About the Creator
Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!
Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!



Comments (27)
It's still Friday! I'm not late, right? I'm not procrastinating, YOU'RE procrastinating. 😅 https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/familiar-face-mb6z0as8%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}
Cutting it short, but here is my entry! I hope you enjoy 🩸 https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/malevolent-fireflies%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I did it Paul. I am not a horror writer but I tried... This is my submission for "Paul Stewart's Unnerve, Unsettle, and Scare Me Challenge" https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/long-walk-home-44hn05wh%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Alright, Paul. Here it is. Tried to go for ominous and unsettling. Hope it meets your criteria. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/they-re-coming-8ptf0u2o%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Ok Paul, this is a tricky one, because of my time constraint. ( traveling again on business) But I find I really want to try this.
Here is my entry into this crazy cool challenge. I forgot to post the challenge in the subtitle but can have that adjusted. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-fridge-9c1xf0mxl%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I didn’t write it, but I truly hope you watch it 😇😉 https://youtu.be/roY5ZB61Ibw?si=Xi6rfevzuLI9aRXE
Alrighty, here's what my weird little brain came up with: https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/the-giveaway-er1se0mrq%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I want to be a rich Vampire, witch, werewolf or something, but just temporarily. Sorry for all the red stuff. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/once-upon-a-halloween%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here is my entry. It is a repurposed story and a bit longer than the word limit... But you've got to read it... https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/fragments-2y19c0m6b%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
I promise to have you shaking in your boots. Watch out!
Sounds like fun. If I ever get caught up....
Here is mine. Perhaps not quite the response you had in mind, but it's where your introduction took me. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/roulette-bn5m0b8s%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here's mine. I really hope it scares you but I'll be happy to settle for unsettlement. I'm a bit nervous that it may not unnerve you. Been in the car a long time today. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/deep-underground%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Here you go. My 'Horror' attempt https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/a-good-read-6nfa0c16%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E And I am really sorry, forgot to do subtitle 🤍
oooo 😈 let the scare games begin.
I'm in! I'm in the car where some of my best work has been inspired. Really hoping I can scare the bejesus out of you.
Missed this-Sorry! Will defo give it a go but there is no way I'm going to be able to scare the horror king! Sure Dharrsheena will come up with something completely freaky and awesome though! 🤍
This sounds awesome! Ghosts aliens and haunted houses it is! 😄
Abigail and I are coming for a visit. That should scare the shit outta ya way faster than anything any of us can write. 😬🤪
Ok...I gave it a go! Don't laugh too hard at my attempt at scaring the b-jeezus (is that how you spell it?) out of you. haha! https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/chef-s-special%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Great idea for a challenge, pal! Although, I'm a scaredy cat and if I let my mind go to the unsettling I'll never sleep again.
I just published a new story 4 days back and you know how Mr Brain is, lol. I'll try to coax him to come up with something!
Okay, okay... I see a plan forming...
Hmmmmm...