Murder She Wrought: a new start
Kicking off the project to write the novel

This is an experiment. A study to answer the question, posed by this author: 'can a novel be written, step-by-step, completely in the open?' I am going to do just this to see if it works. By 'in the open' I mean I am going to go through the planning, writing and (to some extent) the editing of this draft work, publishing each step along the way, for all to see.
Each chapter of Murder She Wrought will be written and published on the Vocal platform in the Chapters community. Any planning, discussion or other such material will be posted to either in writers or fiction as the mood takes me.
Read the original short story: Murder she Wrought
I am hoping that some will see, read and comment on this work, providing useful and (I sincerely hope) critical comments to help me along the way. See what works, see what doesn't, perhaps get some suggestions for alternative storylines and approaches.
Why?
Why am I doing this? Well, as an author who writes short stories, articles and the occasional bit of verse (which some are kind enough to describe as poetry) I find spending longer than a few hours writing to be quite hard work. I find spending longer than a few hours sitting working, quietly, on my own, to be too dull, lacking in excitement and too lonely. I like working in a team, I like a bit of background noise to stimulate me, and I like to be able to chat about stuff irrelevant to the work, in order to make the working day more pleasant and sociable. This includes chatting on social media. Does this make me a bad person? More to the point, I am pretty much retired now, apart from a few odd jobs I still do to top up my meagre pension. Why should I commit myself to any project involving sustained hard work?
Writing isn't hard work to me, it's fun. A long time ago writing and editing were my profession but now it's just a hobby, at least until such time as I get a call from a publisher offering me £25,000+ advance for rights to my WIP. I enjoy writing stuff and just publishing it on Vocal. I get more readers doing this than I have so far for any of the books I have published. I'm still interested in publishing books, but in doing so want to make the most of online avenues such as Vocal too. Not least because the concept of the printed book must surely have a limited future?
Regardless of the future of book pulp, online is certainly going to continue to provide new formats and new opportunities to the reader and writer alike.
Serial short stories
I have only written one (shortish) novel and this started life as a single short story. Each time I started a new chapter, I just thought of it as a new short story starting where the previous chapter left off. This made the otherwise daunting prospect of writing a novel so much easier. If you are interested in seeing the result, you can either buy the book from Amazon, in paperback or Kindle (the latter for a mere US $0.99), or you can read it for free chapter by chapter.
Run With the Pack
Either way do please let me know what you think.
One advantage of writing a novel in this form is that it will give me an indication of where interest tails off. If the number of reads, likes and positive comments reduces to just a few, or even none, I will know it’s time for a rethink.
What do you think?
How do you like this approach? Why not try it yourself? You could take the characters and scenario from chapter one of Murder She Wrought and continue the story, if you want to, taking any other direction you choose. Be my guest.
Measuring success
I have always said that what can't be measured, cannot be managed. A creative writing project is no different. Did I say this was an experiment? I did, so, as such, I must apply some sort criteria for successful outcomes. These include (and I may add to the list) the following:
- I complete the book and it finds some sort of popular, commercial or critical success.
- I complete the book and it is not particularly successful.
- At some point I decide that the work should not be completed for whatever reason I find at the time.
- I learn from the process.
From the above, I am pretty sure that (4) will be true. I am bound to learn something from doing this. If the whole process turns out to be a complete farce or a waste of time, then I will know not to do it again. In fact I can't see any way that I will not learn something from exercising my brain and creative faculties on this. On which basis, even if the book is a complete failure, is never finished, or nobody reads any part of it, the 'experiment' will have proved useful, providing relevant data and insight. This is therefore a no-lose project.
I will of course be working towards outcome (1). As I said earlier, I am hoping that taking the approach set out in this article will help to achieve this. If outcomes (2) or (3) are the end result, I will still learn from the exercise.
There are of course risks, as there are with any project. There is a risk that nobody, or very few people, will read any of the chapters or supporting articles I write. My reputation might be harmed by something I write. I might upset someone. These are risks we all face whenever we post a piece on Vocal. Life is full of such risks but, as they used to say: Nothing ventured, nothing gained.
Onwards
The next part of my adventure will be to answer the question: What's the story Murder She Wrought all about?
The project continues: Plot summary so far.
Thanks for reading
About the Creator
Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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Comments (7)
What an interesting and original approach. I look forward to following your journey.
I'm the complete opposite of you. I like working alone with no background noise or anyone to talk to because I cannot multitask, lol. I wish you all the best for this project!
Oh good luck. Really look forward to reading it as you go.
This sounds to me like a worthy personal challenge, Ray. I am interested in following your process and progress. The thoughts that follow are unsolicited, but since I have already conducted a series of experiments using chapters (without naming or explaining what I am doing on the platform), I offer my experiences in case it is useful. My first experiment was the boldest and the longest - a novella of roughly 26,000 words over 13 chapters. The results exceeded my expectations given the short attention span and time limitations for many readers on Vocal. I was fortunate that Vocal gave the opening chapter Top Story after I had fully posted all 13. This greatly increased the reads of the first chapter, but did not lead to any additional readers of the final installment. The 2nd experiment I posted a 10-chapter serial of roughly 13,000 words but with chapters roughly half as long as my first serial. This did not measurably increase the number of readers who read to the end of the series. The 3rd experiment I posted a 6-chapter serial of exactly 10,000 words. Vocal almost immediately gave me a Top Story for the opening chapter and this particular series is the most successful to date. First chapter had 24 comments, 22 likes and 30 total reads. The finale had 14 comments, 13 likes and 14 reads. One person who came to the series late has read the first 5. If she reads the finale, 15 people will have read the entire series. Conclusions: I have a core group of readers who like my long fiction and will faithfully read it if I break it up in chapters. When a series gets a Top Story billing, it increases initial reads, typically gains me between 2 to 4 new subscribers, but does not appear to affect the number of readers who will commit to reading my long fiction overtime. Suzy Kay, in my opinion one of the best writers on Vocal, wrote a 36-part novella on Vocal - Women who Stay. The final chapter had 18 comments and 24 likes. Her series is absolutely extraordinary storytelling and writing. But even with Top Story billing on the first chapter and multiple shout outs on share your voice, her finale drew 18 comments to the 14 I had for mine. I'm not comparing the quality of my writing to hers. She is in a whole separate league. My point is readership on Vocal may not establish either the quality or potential of a novel project. I conducted the experiment for the soul purpose of determining if I could increase my readership for the long fiction I really prefer to write. And it has. That is enough for me. I'm a good storyteller and a decent writer. It gives me pleasure to write stories and so I do. Would I love to be a better writer? You bet! But what the future holds for my personal dreams, I have no clue.
This is like having a great conversation with you...quite delightful
This sounds like a great endeavor for any writer. Good luck.
Best of luck with this project!