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Journey of Hope and Redemption

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By GunasanjuPublished about a year ago 3 min read
Journey of Hope and Redemption
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It was a cloudy morning. ☁️ My friends and I were walking to school. What used to be an empty field now had a small hut made of bamboo sticks, built by three people the hut didnt complete yet.It is a dry season with no water in the well, and even the lush green grass had withered away.

I felt sad thinking about the family and keep walking, had come here to survive. In the evening, as I walked by the same path, the hut looked even more worn out. The mess around it was because of a person living inside.

When I saw him, I couldn’t make out much. Was his face pale because of hunger, or was he just too tired to care? I walked over to him and asked, “Hey, where are you headed? Isn’t it too hot to be out here?”

He didn’t even look at me. Dressed in tattered clothes, he had something that almost looked like a smile—maybe not a real smile, but close enough. I offered him my water bottle and asked, “Do you need some water?” He reached out and took it slowly, as if unsure whether he should accept it.

I hoped it would bring him some relief, even if just for a moment. I didn’t know what else the little hut could offer, but giving him that water made me feel at ease, like I had done something meaningful. He still stood there, staring off into the distance, like a lost child trying to figure out what to do next.

As I turned to leave, I noticed something strange. Beneath the man's dirt-covered hands, there was a small piece of folded paper. It looked fragile, like it had been opened and closed a hundred times. He glanced at me, catching my gaze on the paper, and then quickly hid it inside his pocket.

I hesitated for a moment. “What’s that?” I asked softly, hoping not to alarm him.

He looked at me for the first time—really looked at me—and there was something in his eyes. Fear? Hope? Regret? I couldn’t tell. Without saying a word, he pulled the paper out again and held it up.

“I’ve been looking for someone,” he whispered. His voice was raspy and low, as if he hadn’t spoken in days. “This letter… it’s from my family. I don’t know where they are now, but they sent me this address.”

I took a step closer, curiosity mixing with concern. I wanted to help, but what could I do? “Is it nearby?” I asked, pointing to the letter. “Maybe I can show it to someone—my parents or my teachers—they might know.”

He shook his head slowly. “No, no… It’s far from here. They left a long time ago. But I can’t give up. I have to find them.”

I looked at the worn piece of paper, barely able to read the faded words. The address was smudged, almost illegible. My heart ached for him—wandering from place to place, chasing the ghost of a hope that seemed so fragile.

“But what if… what if they’re waiting for you somewhere else?” I asked gently. “Or what if—”

“I can’t think like that,” he interrupted, his voice firm now. “If I lose hope, I lose everything. I just need one person—just one—to tell me they’ve seen them, that they’re okay. Then I’ll know.”

I swallowed, unsure what to say. The sky above darkened, and a light breeze picked up, carrying the scent of dust and dry earth. I wanted to ask more, to learn about his family, but the pain etched on his face stopped me.

“Thank you,” he said suddenly, as if remembering my presence. “For the water. For asking. Most people just pass by.”

I nodded, feeling an inexplicable urge to do something more. But as the first drops of rain began to fall, I realized I was already late for home. “I’ll come back tomorrow,” I promised, though I didn’t know what I could offer him then.

The man nodded, a shadow of that almost-smile returning to his lips. “I’ll be here. I’ll wait.”

And as I walked away, I couldn’t shake the thought of the letter and the lonely man standing by that broken hut. I wondered who he was searching for, and why no one seemed to notice the desperation hidden behind his quiet eyes.

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