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Island Time

A Travel Snaps Story in Verse

By D.K. ShepardPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 3 min read
Photo by Judi (my mother)

Forget security and connections

Enjoy the view above a cloud ocean

Specific Pacific destination

To islands tropical and Hawaiian

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Touchdown and take a deep breath of sweet air

Maui sand between your toes, just unwind

You’ve arrived! Release stress, worry, and care

For the next ten days you’re on island time

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Surface of pristine prismatic sapphire

Dotted with bright white sailboat masts and hulls

Underneath, the snorkeler's delight inspires

Coral reef teems with life so colorful

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Weary floaters sigh in satisfaction

When soaking in a Lahaina sunset

Steel blue meets sherbet orange at horizon

Complementary colors compel it

Photo by Judi (my mother)

The road to Hana is steep and winding

"Still the narrow path is the better choice

And you will be rewarded for climbing,"

The rainforest chants with its inviting voice

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Please don't rush the journey, just take your time

Slow way down and stop to smell the flowers

Not to would be committing quite a crime

Even ones with some alien powers

Photo by Judi (my mother)

If you get lost or turned around, don't sweat

Consult a local who can show the way

But best avoid the ones who preen and fret

They're pretty, but not so helpful most days

Photo by Judi (my mother)

The Hana Highway is the way to go

Enjoy the waterfalls, beaches, and views

Keep beat with the rhythm of island flow

Take pauses, there's nothing better to do

Photo by Judi (my mother)

"We all live in a yellow submarine"

Well, not exactly. It's a semi-sub

For taking in the underwater scene

With those in the curious cruisers club

Photo by Judi (my mother)

You might see a tentacled octopus

Perhaps some fish with brightly painted fins

Or Ha‘uku‘uku‘ula‘ulas

Also known as the Red Pencil Urchins

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Sample some good Hawaiian barbecue

Just after an afternoon rain shower

Look up and whoa! It's a double rainbow!

What does it mean? Intense vivid color!

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Go drive the mountainous trek to the top

And stand in awe of the massive crater

The landscape formed from a volcanic pop

Haleakalā, Hawaiian treasure

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Stay at the summit, see the sky on fire

Some early birds prefer a sunrise show

But sunset is pretty spectacular

Just wear warm socks for the sake of your toes

Photo by Judi (my mother)

It's time to bid Maui a fond farewell

Take heart, have no fear and don't you dare cry

Half an adventure left! Isn't that swell!

It's time to island hop via the sky

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Now go unpack your bags and settle in

Take a moment of resort life respite

Before the exploration quest begins

To enjoy Kauai’s marvelous sights

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Exhale and do as the nēnē geese do

Find yourself a spot by the pool, recline

Lounge with a book, maybe nap some too

Sun bathe then come on in, the water’s fine

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Set out on a day trip to Kapa’a

Follow signs and be sure to pull over

To peer out and observe ʻŌpaekaʻa

A vision of tiered cascading water

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Yes, it’s strange, but you’re not mistaken

Of all the creatures you will encounter

Majority will indeed be chickens

For these roaming wild fowl are all over

Photo by Judi (my mother)

You will be asking "Why not?", not "Why me?"

If you get the chance to make a venture

to Waimea Canyon, wonder to see

river cut incision by red water

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Need a refreshment? Well, look no further!

For a chilled coconut can quench your thirst

Sipped through a straw, pure coconut water

Worth a try, though your last might be your first

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Check out north Kaua'i, take my advice

And visit the Limahuli Gardens

To seek out a real bird of paradise

Flora collection closest to heaven's

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Then head to Tunnels Beach if its sunny

The locals call it Makua: full grown

A special backdrop of both jungle trees

And peaks, a shoreline gem all on its own

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Enjoy a luau or a hula show

before your island time comes to an end

"Aloha" is more than "bye" or "hello"

Let your lei remind you that you're a friend

Photo by Judi (my mother)

Author's Note: My parents, sister, and I had planned to go to Hawaii in 2020, but due to the pandemic we had to reschedule for 2021. As soon as I saw this challenge announced I knew which trip I wanted to write about. I loved spending time in such a beautiful tropical setting, but what made it so special was getting to experience the adventure with my dearest loved ones. A massive "thank you" to my mom, who took so many wonderful photos and let me use a small fraction of them in this piece!

Looking back at all the pictures and revisiting the memories also inspired the subject for a villanelle poem:

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About the Creator

D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶2 years ago

    Hi, I’m back to say… I liked this beautiful poem so much that I included it in my latest Angie’s Artefacts: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/angie-s-artifacts-iv%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • TheSpinstress 2 years ago

    I love the idea of entering this challenge with a poem! Hawaii sounds wonderful, and you certainly got some amazing photos.

  • I absolutely love this whimsical ode to Hawaii! I wish I’d had more than 24 hours there, back in 1984 (it was a last minute stopover & barely added to the cost). Your Mum’s incredible photos perfectly complement your poem… ‘ Surface of pristine prismatic sapphire Dotted with bright white sailboat masts and hulls Underneath, the snorkeler's delight inspires Coral reef teems with life so colorful“ … wish I was there 🏄‍♀️.

  • Nice work from you.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Ah, this brings back memories of my own trip up Hawaii. Thought there was no napping! We packed a lot in!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Beautiful poem, beautiful escape. The photos are wonderful too. Sounds like an adventure that you will always treasure, DK!

  • JBaz2 years ago

    My wife and I have been to all the Hawaiin Islands and each one is special. I will say Kuai was the surprise that enticing me to return there. We are also lucky to have seen Maui shortly before the devastating fires.

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