Dancing in the Summer Rain
Washing the World Away
Today was a hot day
Very hot
Oppressively humid
Hazy skies mute the blue
The kind of summer heat that makes your sun-drenched skin
Sticky with sweat
The rain began at sundown
While we were sitting out on the porch
Pinging the metal roof
Like a thousand beads falling to the floor
the radio muffled by the rain
I took my shirt off
And stepped off the porch into the rain
Cold raindrops hit my skin
Setting off a million goosebumps
I looked back at him on the porch
And beckoned him with my hand to join me in the rain
He looked at me with hesitation but relented
He took off his shirt
And joined me in the rain
We held each other, laughing at the silliness
Remembering with nostalgia
Times as children, we would dance in the rain
We started swaying to the music
Rain dripping off the tip of his nose
Drops of water dripping off my brow
He held my head and drew our foreheads together
Our skin now wet
Not sticky
I laid my head on his chest
As we continued our sway to the music
It started to rain heavily
But neither one of us was ready to go back
The rain washing away the sweat
The water drowning our anxieties
Making us clean
From the battle of the day.
Grabbing hold of the moment of happiness
We remained
Dancing in the summer rain.
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J. Delaney-Howe
Bipolar poet. Father. Grandfather. Husband. Gay man. I write poetry, prose, some fiction and a good bit about family. Thank you for stopping by.
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Comments (21)
Gorgeous and intimate - Well done J.D-H!
Deliciously free & wet.
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Nicely done, congratulations on your Top Story. Subscribed!
Congratulations on your top story!
There’s something timeless and healing about this piece. You captured that beautiful, wordless connection between two people so effortlessly—where rain isn’t just water, but release. I felt every drop.
Congrats on the TS!! It couldn't happen for a sweeter poem, or to a sweeter person. Hugs, Jim
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we must dance! beautiful jim :) and congrats 💙
Congratulations 👏🎉
Heck ya Top Story!!!
This is beautiful .😍
Beautiful. Love the Romantic imagery
Love the line - hazy skies mute the blue.
This is so lovely 🥹 I had to read it again… Because the first time all I could hear was Belinda Carlisle singing in my head from the title 😆🫶🏻
Excellent piece, J. You took me to a moment of calm happiness.
This is beautiful 😍 I'm also jealous because it's winter in Australia an I'm cold 🥶
This is the sweetest thing 🥹🥹🥹
Beautiful. Happened to pop up while I was sitting outside listening to the rains roll in. Beautifully evocative piece