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words unsaid to my niece: a prompted poem

By Savannah K. WilsonPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2025
Written from a Queer Vocal Voices Prompt

It’s not your fault I’m not there

You didn’t do anything wrong

I’m sorry you’ll never meet me

Only the performing mask

My dear niece, I wish I could say

Your aunt, not your uncle loves you

No one speaks of me anymore

Innocent niece, made bystander

From things unsaid

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This piece was written for a prompt from the QVV Facebook group, "Craft a poem with 50 words about unsaid things. Things you've wanted to say but haven't, good or bad." So I wrote a poem to my niece who is not allowed to know me as Aunt or as Savannah, and this poem speaks to the things unsaid to her about why I'm not around in her life anymore.

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Here is the link to a piece all about QVV: If you are a Queer writer on Vocal, check us out and join the fun!

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Savannah K. Wilson

She/Her | Australian 🏳️‍⚧️ Author

Queer and all class with a touch of sass! (or maybe the reverse!)

short stories, poetry, life experience

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  • Oneg In The Arctic10 months ago

    I remember this crushing one <3

  • It's so crushing to lose a part of your family for living your life the way you must to be "you". I really hope you remain in solidarity with your true identity and never hold back to make someone else comfortable. Big hug

  • Tales by J.J.11 months ago

    profoundly moving, capturing the pain of unspoken truths and hidden identity. heartfelt words

  • Susana's World11 months ago

    So painful, this life sometimes..thank u for sharing the pain so beautifully expressed💜

  • Congrats 🎉🍾🎈🎊 on TS

  • Oneg In The Arctic11 months ago

    So much heart <3

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Heartwrentching!!! Brilliantly expressed!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Rachel Robbins11 months ago

    Oh Savannah - I'm sorry these words are going unsaid. I am sure you would be a most excellent aunt and I hope at some point you get the chance to be.

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    This is heartbreaking, but beautifully written. Congrats on the TS.

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨11 months ago

    Heartbreaking, Savannah 💔 I feel the weight of emotion in this xx

  • 👏👏👏

  • Shirley Belk11 months ago

    I love this poem and I am so sorry for you and your niece...it's wrong to deprive a child of all the love they could get (except in cases of abuse or neglect)

  • Raphael Fontenelle11 months ago

    So very sad and heartbreaking.

  • J. Delaney-Howe11 months ago

    Beautiful but heart breaking.

  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    Awe, you’ should send this to your niece! Great work! Beautiful poem!

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