Your haiku beautifully captures the raw power of nature in just a few lines. The combination of lightning, thunder, and the shaking earth creates an intense, vivid scene. The brevity enhances the intensity, allowing us to feel the awe and primal force of the moment.
Fantastic! ✨💥👏
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Your haiku beautifully captures the raw power of nature in just a few lines. The combination of lightning, thunder, and the shaking earth creates an intense, vivid scene. The brevity enhances the intensity, allowing us to feel the awe and primal force of the moment. Fantastic! ✨💥👏