Longing to catch my breath in the
Oscillating yellow-balm beam of your earth-shattering
Voluminous glow, I am caught in a distraction… no, it’s been there all along!
Evolving into a deep, intense feeling of overflowing romantic love.
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Awww, this gave me such a wonderful feeling! I absolutely loved your choice of words! You're so brilliant!
Ooh, every word was so impactful! Great job, you can feel the emotion with this.
That is very beautifully put Melissa.
💖 The realization that you love someone romantically is such a uniquely beautiful surprise. You’ve captured it so well!
WOW. Your descriptions here are like honey; so sweet, dreamy, and gorgeous!! 🥹❤️❤️