Young Love
The Distraction of a Lad
I love you more
Then any word can say
You are the one
I want to stay
I'll love you till the end
Of all time without a trace
You are my friend
My lover, my face
Come what may, I'll be here
For you, my dear
You are my air
My sun, my moon, my beer
I love you more
Then any word can say
You are the one
I want to stay
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Nowadays it's so difficult to find love like this. Awesome poem!