You with love without Me
Inverse poem
Racing around my mind
All these voices
All these emotions
Even feeling
It within me
I couldn't find
Love, but
I needed
To find myself
First
Before I found you
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I should give full credit of this poem to divine intervention, who dropped these words into my pen from the roof of the small bookstore I'm writing this from. I considered playing around with these words and structure, however it felt like trying to fixing something not broken, however broken these words may feel to some. This poem moved me profoundly as I wrote it, and all I hope is that it does the same for you, the reader.
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I really like the message behind this one, and the idea of self-love being necessary before you can love somebody else. A great read 👏
Congrats on Top Story!🥳
You’ve got a beautiful mind, Tyler.
I love everything about this poem
I love your acknowledgement. spirit guides are helped vocalize a few of my poems as well
You are a poet! It should fall without to much intervention. Free verse is my first choice always. I felt where your heart is at, that's a good thing. Congratulations!
So touching
Love it. Beautifully written backwards and forwards.
Absolutely divine as is
Amazing job! Keep up the outstanding work—congrats!
Really beautiful 👏
Beautifully written. Congrats on the TS.
Beautiful! I love it :)