You Were Just in Line for Flour / They Rained on You
A Sky-ku for Gaza and the Flour Massacre of February 29, 2024
By Oneg In The ArcticPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Julian Andres Carmona Serrato on Unsplash
if only the mail
was faster than a bullet
you'd get my goodbye
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A queer storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
Water is Life ✊
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters

Comments (3)
Wow! Did that knock me down or what? Extremely deep and gave me an extended version of pause.
A poem more powerful than a locomotive! ⚡♥️⚡
so short yet so poignant.. good one, friend! :)