You Too
For the "This Is How I Remember It" Challenge
Nightfall comes,
I climb into bed.
I lie down.
My head hits the pillow.
I close my eyes.
And then it starts.
I’ve mind-travelled back to this afternoon.
I’m sitting there at the bustling café,
waiting for my coffee and banana bread.
The waiter strides over
and says, “Enjoy your meal.”
I say, “You too.”
After a moment of pause,
he turns and walks away,
and I’m left a stammering mess.
Why do I always do that?
Why am I so socially awkward?
Can’t I be normal for once?
Now I’m lying here,
12:47 a.m.,
replaying the moment
over and over in my head.
Did I notice a furrow of his brow?
Did I see a tiny smirk?
I’m sure I saw him joke
with the other staff member on duty.
If I replay it over and over in my mind,
will I get it right next time?
I took a bite of my warm, soft banana bread.
I had a sip of my strong, smooth coffee.
But I’d ruined it for myself.
I pulled my hoodie over my head
and walked out the door,
looking down in shame.
I’m on a diet.
I shouldn’t have even had banana bread,
but I thought it would be better than cake.
If I hadn’t had caffeine so late in the day,
then I’d be able to sleep,
and this whole situation wouldn’t have happened.
I wonder how many slices of banana bread
I’ve eaten over my lifetime.
Haha, banana is a funny word.
How could…
Zzz.
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Sandy Gillman
I’m a mum to a toddler, just trying to get through the day. I like to write about the ups and downs of parenting. I’m not afraid to tell it like it is. I hope you’ll find something here to laugh, relate to, and maybe even learn from.
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
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Comments (15)
It's so hard not to think of them as the exact same as us. When we say the wrong thing, it consumes us because they are not us in that moment... Maybe it's the little we know about them that makes the mistake so catastrophic... 🤔 I love how this feels as though it was happening in real time. How you noticed the little things. How time seems to stop. After those little things are noticed. Will I get it right next time. The chances are slim lol. I am sipping hot chocolate right now. So this was so perfect for me to sit and read under my blanket. 'How could...' Oh it really felt like you fell asleep there. I can't express how much I loved this. This was perfect. Because it was relatable. And your skill in being able to draw pauses to mimic the awkwardness. Outstanding work 🤗❤️🖤
Ha ha, I wish I had a dollar for every stupid or embarrassing thing I'd ever said. Loved the ending!
Most nights… so relatable.
Cute stuff Sandy! 😁🫶🏾
I love your description of the awkward moment as I can relate. Lately it has happened to me a hundred of times as I am learning Finnish and all I can say is "kiitos" = "thank you"; they say "kiitos", I say "kiitos". Even when after saying it, I know I should've said the equivalent of "you're welcome" = "ole hyvä". Thank you for making us all feel less socially awkward.
Banana bread and coffee - i have to try this combination. But it is true stopping yourself is very hard because everything looks twice as good when you are on diet
I love your poem. I also love a slice of a banana bread. Thanks for playing this morning Riddle. Tip $ 2.00 here. 🥰
A delightful poem… thoroughly relatable! I’ve given up on greeting people with “Good afternoon” (or morning) because I can’t keep track of the time.
At first I was like "Mmmm, yummy!" Then I was mortified and then I started laughing. Loved your poem!
lol, but relatable also
I like the way you tackle reality-based situations, Sandy, with warmth and humour-although they may be hard to address. Well done. And love this!
At least it made him smile, in a monotonous job.
Hahah. Always a fun and genuine reads your real life experiences. @Sandy Gillman
Thank you for the reminder. Not fun.❤️
This reminds me of me, thankyou for sharing xx